Six Feet Under

Dec. 15, 2008 - Chapter One

 

Chapter 1

1985…

          The quiet of the night is broken by a shrill scream of pain. The stillness of the woods around the backwoods home five miles from Smethport, PA shattered in one moment. The snow that covered the ground was receiving a fresh coating as another scream pierced into the darkness. Another voice, not the one uttering the cries resounds through the door of the cabin.

“Come on, push!” it is a man’s voice. The woman grits her teeth and pushes, uttering another cry of pain.

            Brent Henderson aided his wife in the birth of their first children. I say children, for they were going to have twins. Brent didn’t trust hospitals. Neither did his wife, Anna. He had read up a little on the subject of childbirth and was ready to do anything to bring these little ones into the world. They knew it was twins for two reasons. One, they could both feel two little babies inside Anna’s stomach. Another was that her stomach was twice the size it would be if it were only one baby.

            He had done a little reading on what the process of childbirth was like, and how to tell certain things about the birth. He did this to train himself to be the midwife. He didn’t trust any of his neighbors either.

“Push!” he said again. “I’m trying! Would you be patient Brent!” she said in an exasperated voice. She let out another cry and pushed even harder.

“I see one! I see one! It’s coming out now!” Brent exclaimed in happiness. It was a long time before it came out.

“It’s a boy! It’s a boy!” Brent said as he was jumping in place. “Here comes another!” Brent yelled in jubilation.

Anna gave another hard push and it came out.

“A girl Anna! We have a little girl!”

Anna slumped back on the pillow and said in a low and raspy, yet joyful voice, “I’m so happy, Brent. But I just don’t have the strength to…” She cut herself short.

She closed her eyes and let out a short gasp. She had died. Brent hadn’t taken his eyes off his new son and daughter until Anna gave that short gasp. He gave his son a slap to get him to breathe and then he sat him down on the cloth next to him. He almost forgot about the little girl as he rushed to his wife’s aid, but he slapped her as well and set her beside the boy. “Anna?” he asked in a trembling voice.

He repeated himself, “Anna?” “Anna!” he exclaimed, crying as he rushed to her side.

He felt for a pulse and could not find one. He grabbed her head and cried, leaning on her rocking back and forth. Brent realized she was dead, and in a flood of tears he screamed. In unison the babies chimed in. Brent was angry, very angry and hurt by this.

“WHY???!!!” he screamed through his tears, “WHY MY WIFE???!!!!”

He stayed like that all night, and slowly rocked himself to sleep. He woke the next morning not caring what would happen. The sadness that had plagued him in the night followed him like a dark cloud, never leaving, only increasing…

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Dec. 18, 2008 - Theory

Posted by SemperFidelis
Is Brent the man in black?
Is Kevin the baby?
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Dec. 18, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Storyteller
Wow. That Prologue was scary. Like Ted DekKer's stories.
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Dec. 19, 2008 - Okay...

Posted by ThrillAuthor
You're a sharp pen Semper, you nailed it on the head about Kevin, but I can't say about Brent. It's too risky to reveal anything. Good guess though.
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Dec. 19, 2008 - I guess it's true then...

Posted by ThrillAuthor
Apparently everyone thinks that I write like DeKker. Maybe I'm his long lost little brother or something...
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Dec. 20, 2008 - hey,

Posted by TedDeKker
ok....it's disturbing for guys to write birth scenes...

hey...if they think you sound like me...that's cool...lol jk!

but here is the thing...if he left them little babies by themselves while he grieved over his wife through the night, they would of died... =( then it couldn't of been Kevin... just a thought.

Other than that....it was great...like always... have i ever told you that you are the best?! lol

Ted
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Mar. 30, 2009 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Arwen95
That was sad! =( I don't want to know anything like SemperFidelis does! =)

Arwen Evenstar
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Mar. 31, 2009 - :-D

Posted by ThrillAuthor
Don't worry, I try not to reveal too much in my stories. It does ruin the surprise, does it not?
~T
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Jul. 9, 2009 - ME!!!!

Posted by MaidenCapitolaBallot
Very good, I would read more but I must eat-sadly. It pulls right in! Am eager for more! I would say more but it would be the usual I would say. I knew there was a reason I called you DeKker.
Your sister, Isilwen
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Jul. 10, 2009 - :-D

Posted by ThrillAuthor
Thanks! It's good to hear you like it! :-D Yep, you know me. I can't wait for you to read more!
~T
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