I need a new title. :P - Chapter one.

Feb. 16, 2008 - Chapter one.

"Danyl! Hannah!" Starla Cried as she Ran down the Pavment to the Front of A Building With a Steeple. "You will Never Guess what i brought!" "What?" Danyl Asked. "Missionary Tracts!" Starla Said in Excitment. "What are those?" Hannah Asked as she Ran her Fingers down her Lavender Velvet Jumper. "They are Little Pamplets With Information like on How to become a Christian and How Halloween is bad, and How Prayer is Real!" Starla Said in Excitment. "Well. What do we do with them?" Danyl Asked. "We Leave them in Public Places!" Starla Said. "What do you Mean?" Hannah Asked. "You Leave them in Places like Restraunts and Libraries....And Stores!" Starla Said. "But....What if Somebody Catches one of us Leaving one?" Danyl Protested. "But?" Starla Exclaimed. "Esther Was not Afraid to go up to the King and ask for Protection. Why should we?" "Let's Start After Church!" Hannah Said. "Mom said it would be Okay if we could go to Burger King for Lunch!" Just then they heard Music from inside the Catherdrel "After church." Danyl said as she raced inside the Building. After Church the Girls met in front of the Big Brick Building. "I'll give each of you 5 Tracts to put ion Bathrooms On Tables and I'll give you a Roll of tape to tape them to bathroom doors." Starla Said. "Right." Danyl and Hannah Said. They Stuck Tracts to doors Vending Machines and put them on tables. "I Have Plenty more for the Library." Starla Said as they Walked back to the Church to find they're Parent's who had Stayed for the Meeting. "We can Put them in books leave them at the Computers and Leave some at the Check-out-counter!" "This is Fun!" Hannah Said. "I Feel like a Spy on a Secret Mission." Danyl Agreed. "Let's go at Two o Clock Tomorrow." Starla Said. "Okay. See you tomorrow!" Hannah Said as she Ran through the Light Rain to her Parent's Car Where her older sister Alison was waiting for her. "See you Tomorrow Starla!" Danyl Hugged Starla and Ran Inside to Find her Parents. "What a Great Day!" Starla Said to herself as she Walked home. (She lives about 4 miles from The Church, And Doesn't like being Stuck in a car for more than 30 minutes.) She pulled her Cellphone out of her Purse. "Mom." Starla said. "I'm going to be home in about two hours. Love you!" She Clicked off and Put it away. "Now to get to work."

Comments

Feb. 16, 2008 - Whoo-hoo!

Posted by SuzyScribbles

Hey, I love your opening lines. You are great at dialogue, and I can sense the girls' excitement about their "secret" mission. Nice beginning. So...what's going to happen? Is someone going to give them a hard time for passing out tracts? What kind of conflict (trouble) is going to happen to the girls that make them grow (in the Lord) and stand firm.
I'm interested in seeing more!
THanks for sharing....

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Feb. 16, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by SuzyScribbles

Oh, good idea! a mean librarian? I wonder what will happen then! Don't tell me. I'll read it for myself when you get it posted. :-)

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Feb. 17, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Roseleona