Without music, what's the point in life?

Feb. 10, 2008 - By You

I wrote this song, it still needs work. This blog will be where I put my poems and lyrics and stuff. If anyone had any input that would make my song better, please tell me!

I long to see your face
I long to feel your warm embrace
But all I see are shadows
Reflecting off the dimly lighted walls
And all I feel is cold
Surrounding me and then I fall
Down

I scream out your name
But you haven’t come to save me
You’re to blame
As I lay on the floor
The tears pour down my face
That’s when I know that I am erased
By you

(Chorus)
The water’s rising now
I try to catch my breath
But deep inside I know
That this is death
I’m so trapped in this life
I feel I’m losing ground
And I can’t move because I am bound
By you

The light is fading away
Soon I’ll be trapped in darkness
And all I’ll feel is cold
Surrounding me

I used to feel so hurt
I used to feel your love
Even though it’s been gone for so long
Now I can’t even feel
Anything

(Chorus to fade)

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