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Jun. 8, 2007
The Vator- Chapter 3

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               When Jim woke up he was in a small grass hut. The air was filled with the scent of horse poop. Jim got up from the straw bed he was laying on, his head felt as if two boulders smashed it between them. Also his right arm hurt just the same; there was even a little blood on his shirt. He stood all the way up and looked around. The grass hut was wet from a rain shower, there were two windows and a door, and there was a small wooden table in the middle of the room. There were no other rooms except a closet to side. Suddenly a figure stepped in the room; it was the same man Jim saw before he was knocked out. Jim was worried that the man might do something to him so he said “don’t worry I won’t hurt you.” Then Jim sat down on the bed again to reassure the man.

                “You tried to kill me yesterday!” the man said angrily

               “No... I wouldn’t kill you I was just going to meet you.” Jim said worriedly.

                The man must have agreed with Jim because he sat down then said. “My name is Etheiolach what’s your name?”

                “My name is James but you can just call me Jim.” Jim now could see all of the man’s features, he had a short beard same color as his hair, and his face was dirty and sweaty. Etheiolach had on strange clothes; they looked like medieval time clothes. He also had on a cloak which was tied together in the middle by a pin. On the pin was a strange symbol, it showed a sun surrounded by small circles. Etheiolach was also carrying a sword, the hilt was very decorative and so was his sheath. Jim couldn’t see the blade because it was in its sheath. Jim decided that he should be friendly so as not to get the man angry.

                “Would you like some breakfast?” Etheiolach said suddenly.

               Jim answered “yes …I would like some cereal.”

               Etheiolach looked at Jim very puzzled “what’s serial?” he asked.

                “Oh……you don’t know what cereal is?”

                “Nope”

               “well its stuff that you put in milk. Some of the stuff looks like mini doughnuts.”

               Etheiolach looked puzzled again and said “what is donuts?”

               Jim sighed this was going to take a long time “never mind forget what I said just get what you normally eat.”

               “Okay” Etheiolach said as he got up and walked out of the hut. Jim wondered why Etheiolach didn’t know what cereal was, it was the most popular breakfast food back at home. But maybe this place was different, after all the man wore strange clothes.

                Jim thought for a moment, maybe he had traveled back into the past and this was in the medieval times! It all mad sense now, he had spun fast enough to travel back into the past! Suddenly a thought struck him like an iron bar. The man had said some weird words, and then forced him to fly through the air to smash against a rock, and all this from three feet away! Jim knew what that meant; it meant that the man could use magic! And there was no magic in the past. Jim finally realized he hadn’t gone back into the past, he had gone to another world and he might be stuck here if he couldn’t find the Vator again. He had to go back, Jim raced frantically out of the hut and into a large village. He raced through the streets slipping here and there; he couldn’t find Etheiolach or the way out of the village. He ran around a corner he bumped into a fat man. Jim looked up just in time to see the man hit him over the head with a pot then everything went black!!


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Jun. 8, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Jo


Hey, cool story!!!

Do you mind if I add you to my friends list?

:::Jo:::


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