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I have to quit blogging now, I much as I hate it I don't have any time, with school and everything else I'm involed with. So this is it. |
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I finally know how these tag things work, I think I'm going to tag AddGirl15,Storyteller, and chezdak. How many brothers and sister's do you have? What are their ages? (I have two, Tyler,who is ten,Olivia,who is six.) Are you a morning or night person? (I'm totally night) If you could vist any place in the world where would it be? (Hawaii or any other tropical island) If someone made a movie of your life would it be comedy, a romantic comedy,a drama, action, or science fiction? (Drama for me) What's the hardest thing you've ever done? (For me it was trying to balance on a rope 25ft up in the air.I of coarse had a whole bunch of gear if I fell on me, thankfully) Would you rather dress causual or dress up when you go out with freinds or family? (I'm in between) Are you out-going or reserved, what's your personality like? (most people think i'm more reserved and serious, that's when you first meet me. After you get to know me more I can be out-going and talkative) |
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I've been tagged by storyteller,well here's my answers to the questions. What is your favorite type of building? (The capitol in Washington,Olympia) What is your favorite landscape? (The beach) What is your favorite animal? (cat and dog) What is yur favorite color? (brown) What is your favorite game? (Stratego and Risk,they tie) What is your favorite hobby? (I have four,writing,reading,piano,rollor-skating !) I think I will tag... NathensAdventures,and musicfreak. |
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If any of you've read the first two chapters of my story and really enjoyed it, Great! But I'm sure the first two chapters you read might of been confusing to you? Like for instence(If that's how you spell it)you didn't know much about Tristan, only that he was the Prince and that he was planning to run away. You also couldn't really feel like you were in the medieval times,at least I couldn't really feel it. But don't worry I've got it all figured out, at least I think I do. Chapter 3 will be the best chapter yet,and for now I'll give you some backround infromation. Tristan Wellington: Age:15 Appearance: Black hair, green eyes, average height and weight. Prince Gwayne Wellington: Age:21 Appearance:Dark brown hair, brown eyes, average height and weight. Isabella, the princess of Scotland Age:9 Appearance:Long red straight hair, brown eyes,very thin, and average weight. Myles Gildon (a prisoner in King Charles' Prison) Age:20 Apearance:Blode hair, blue eyes, avereage height and weight. These will be the main Character's for my story, hope you get a better idea. |
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I've been so upset this week because I don't have any ideas for chapter #3. Whenever I write a story I don't useully sit around thinking about what I'm going to write about, I just write whatever comes to mind. I think that's where I've gone wrong.I need to think more of the plot of my story before I just start writing, that way it might be more interesting.Don't you think? Well I think alot different than some people do so tell me what you think. So I finally made up my disision. I'm going to have to take awile on chapeter #3. A another week at the most |
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As I was walking in the courtyard to deliver the piece of paper to my father, Alica, one of the peasants, asked me to help her carry a bucket of water. It seems like no one is treating me like the Prince around here! Even the peasants take advantage of me. No one ever calls me Prince Tristan, But they call my brother Gwayne, Prince Gwanyne,probley because he's great at everything. I'm only good at keeping prisoners company and looking after the horses. Mine as well be the stable boy. And my Father,King Charles,is so evil ! He has a nine year old girl as a prisoner ,how awfull ! The girl Isabella, who's actually the princess from Scotland ,was taken away from her parents,the King and Queen of Scotland,when she was only four,and to think that my father wanted to do somthing so evil just makes me angry! All he wants is war and violence. He doesn't even care about me.That's why I'm going to run away. Far away. I'm going to run away to Scotland,and I'm taking Isabella back to her Mother and Father.I here that the King of Scotland is very good and fair to his people.Maybe he'd let me be one of his peasants! or even better yet be the stable boy! My plan seemed so Grand ! But all those thoughts disappeared when I saw my Father walking towards me. "That's right" I thought."I need give the piece of paper to Him." But than another thought came to my mind."I wonder what the message says? I better read it in my room first before I give to him, that way I know they're not going to plan another evil deed. I shoved the piece of paper under my shoe and darted to my bedroom. |
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( OK. I finally started chapter 1. Any suggustions? Please tell me what you think.) January ,1555, "Tristan !!" called a stern voice. I turned around just in time to see Sir Keith Wellington one of My Father's Knights, scowling right at me. "Yes, do you need something," I responded back. "Yes, I still need you to deliver the message to the King ! Why haven't you done it?" "Because, I didn't feel like it. I thought that I'd much rather take Black out for a ride. Besides I am the Prince, and it's about time people below my rank start treating me like one. Why don't you ask one of the messangers to take the message to the King ? that's what they're for." "I don't want the messanger to take the message to the King , I want you to take it to him. Do you understand me !"Sir Keith said ,in an unpleasant tone. "Yees ...Sirr Keith, " I said, my voice shaking a little, "I understand." It was very obvious that this man was very angry with me, and whenever Sir Keith is angry with me I have to let him have his way,otherwise He'll get me in trouble like he has before. "Ok, I said back . "I'll take the message to him right away." "Good, an evil look appeared on his face. "You'd better take it to him or else." He handed me a rolled up piece of paper, the same one he handed me before. "I think you dropped this, found it in Black's stable. Now make sure it gets delivered." I nodded ,grabbed the message and with that took off to go find my father. |
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Tristan Wellington wishes he wasn't his Father's son. His Father, King of England is cruel and evil to his people. He only want's what's best for himself,not his family or people.King Charles never has time for his youngest son Tristan. He of coarse has time for his older son Gwanyne, England's future King.Gwanye seems to be succesful in everything. He is the leader of all knights, he is the best swordsman in all England,and no one has ever beat Prince Gwanye in a joust.Tristan's jelousy and hate takes him too far when he decides to run away to Scotland. But he does not make this journey alone.He takes one other person with him. One of his Father's prisoners!! Come on my blog two days from now to read chapter one. Please leave me a comment if you have any tips on writing a story, I need as many tips as I can possibley get. Or if you don't have any tips leave me a comment anyway!! |