Tristan Wellington wishes he wasn't his Father's son.  His Father, King of England is cruel and evil to his people. He only want's what's best for himself,not his family or people.King Charles never has time for his youngest son Tristan. He of coarse has time for his older son Gwanyne, England's future King.Gwanye seems to be succesful in everything. He is the leader of all knights, he is the best swordsman in all England,and no one has ever beat Prince Gwanye in a joust.Tristan's jelousy and hate takes him too far when he decides to run away to Scotland. But he does not make this journey alone.He takes one other person with him. One of his Father's prisoners!!

Come on my blog two days from now to read chapter one.

Please leave me a comment if you have any tips on writing a story, I need as many tips as I can possibley get. Or if you don't have any tips leave me a comment anyway!!

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Posted by SuzyScribbles

Well, I can see why you moved from dog stories to this. It looks exciting and I can see growth here from when you were young and took the WW class at BLCC. Nice summary of your story, Breegan. I'll show you how to get a widget to put on the WW blog so others can hop over to your blog and see your chapters.

As far as commenting, you have to make sure you are LOGGED IN in order for it to show your name and make it clickable. Otherwise, you are "anonymous." There are two boxes at the top of the comment post. Make sure the black dot is in the "registered user" circle. That should make it work and then folks can click back to you. To get folks to come to your blog, you do need to make sure you have that clickable link for your name.

hope that helps....

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Posted by flarter

You're story sounds good.

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