Journey Through The Middle Ages
Jul. 29, 2008
Tristan's Frustration Chapter #1

   ( OK. I finally started chapter 1. Any suggustions? Please tell me what you think.)

                                                 January ,1555,  

 "Tristan !!" called a stern voice. I turned around just in time to see Sir Keith Wellington  one of  My Father's Knights, scowling right at me.

 "Yes, do you need something," I responded back.

  "Yes, I still need you to deliver the message to the King ! Why haven't you done it?"

"Because, I didn't feel like it.  I thought that I'd much rather take Black out for a ride. Besides I am the Prince, and it's about time people below my rank start treating me like one. Why don't you ask one of the messangers to take the message to the King ? that's what they're for." 

 "I don't want the messanger to take the message to the King , I want you to take it to him. Do you understand me !"Sir Keith said ,in an unpleasant tone.

"Yees ...Sirr Keith, " I said, my voice shaking a little, "I understand."

It was very obvious that this man was very angry with me, and whenever Sir Keith is angry with me I have to let him have his way,otherwise He'll get me in trouble like he has before.

"Ok, I said back . "I'll take the message to him right away."

"Good, an evil look appeared on his face. "You'd better take it to him or else."

He handed me a rolled up piece of paper, the same one he handed me before.

"I think you dropped this, found it in Black's stable. Now make sure it gets delivered."

I nodded ,grabbed the message and with that took off to go find my father.


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Jul. 30, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Storyteller


Wow, good story! i can feel the suspense between Tristran and the knight. write more soon!

Jordan


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