As I was walking in the courtyard  to deliver the piece of paper to my father, Alica, one of the peasants, asked me to help her carry a bucket of water. It seems like no one is treating me like the Prince around here! Even the peasants take advantage of me. No one ever calls me Prince Tristan, But they call my brother Gwayne, Prince Gwanyne,probley because he's great at everything. I'm only good at keeping prisoners company and looking after the horses. Mine as well be the stable boy. And my Father,King Charles,is so evil ! He has a nine year old girl as a prisoner ,how awfull ! The girl Isabella, who's actually the princess from Scotland ,was taken away from her parents,the King and Queen of Scotland,when she was only four,and to think that my father wanted to do somthing so evil just makes me angry! All he wants is war and violence. He doesn't even care about me.That's why I'm going to run away. Far away. I'm going to run away to Scotland,and I'm taking Isabella back to her Mother and Father.I here that the King of Scotland is very good and fair to his people.Maybe he'd let me be one of his peasants! or even better yet be the stable boy! My plan seemed so Grand !  But all those thoughts disappeared when I saw my Father walking towards me. "That's right"  I thought."I need give the piece of paper to Him." But than another thought came to my mind."I wonder what the message says? I better read it in my room first before I give to him, that way I know they're not going to plan another evil deed. I shoved the piece of paper under my shoe and darted to my bedroom. 

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That was really good. Hey, is this story based on things that really happened? 'Cuz I'm studying about the Middle Ages right now in school, and I don't think I remember a King Charles that had a prisoner named Isabella. . . and then I might not have studied about that yet. Write more soon!

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