If any of you've read the first two chapters of my story and really enjoyed it, Great! But I'm sure the first two chapters you read might of been confusing to you? Like for instence(If that's how you spell it)you didn't know much about Tristan, only that he was the Prince and that he was planning to run away. You also couldn't really feel like you were in the medieval times,at least I couldn't really feel it. But don't worry I've got it all figured out, at least I think I do. Chapter 3 will be the best chapter yet,and for now I'll give you some backround infromation.  

                                       Tristan Wellington:

  Age:15     Appearance: Black hair, green eyes, average height and weight.

                                      Prince Gwayne Wellington:

Age:21     Appearance:Dark brown hair, brown eyes, average height and weight.

                                     Isabella, the princess of Scotland

Age:9       Appearance:Long red straight hair, brown eyes,very thin, and average weight.

                                Myles Gildon (a prisoner in  King Charles' Prison)

Age:20      Apearance:Blode hair, blue eyes, avereage height and weight.

       These will be the main Character's for my story,   hope you get a better idea.

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Posted by Storyteller

Good idea discribing their appearance! Something that I fail to do, and that leaves my readers guessing about my characters too much.
g'bye

Jordan

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Posted by chezdak

WHAT! Another writer, HSB is full of them!!! Oh,well, is it fact history or fiction history? I've been to Scotland before, well, actully that is a very silly thing to say as I AM Scottish, I was born in Wales but lived all my life in Scotland eccept a few years like 3 or 4 years and I've lived in Wales longer than England.
Oh yes and you spell it instance - well, that is what I think anyway. Was there really a princess of Scotland called Isabella? If so, I've never heard of her, I've heard of Mary Queen of Scots and Queen Bodica ( if that's how you spell it ). Oops I forgot, I don't think Bodica WAS Queen of Scotland...
well, bye for now
Chezdak

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