Turn The World To A Love Song.

• Feb. 19, 2008 - Reason for the Scars

Posted in My Songs

Okay, so I made it into the top two, and I had to write one by the title or "Reason for the Scars", Songwriter picked the tiltle (yay Danya!)]


Apparently they are judging us on certain things, but no one has told me what it is, and when I heard the title, this just sort of came to me, so I thought I would submit it anyway.


So here it is, but personaly, I think Musicfreak is much more talented :D

 


He goes home each day
Believing what we told him
So he drinks, and cuts, and hates
And when he comes back we beat him


This is the reason for the scars


She was cursed with beauty
We all just guessed at what she was
So she let people love her and use her
To try to get our applause


This is the reason for the scars
But shouldn't she get a chance?
This is the reason for the scars
But she is still so lovely


And we want him to ask for mercy
But he says he doesn't need it
Claims he has the Fathers love
Why don't we know what this is?


This is the reason for the scars
Doesn't someone love him?
This is the reason for the scars
Because we don't want him anymore


And should their paths cross
I'm sure they would never know
Because he's weird, and she's useless
We've told them that countless times
Why shouldn't they believe us?


This is the reason for the scars
What do they mean when they say they're loved?
This is the reason for the scars
Who is this God?
This is the reason for the scars
I think they are trying to scare us
This is the reason for their scars
We don't want there example...
But we need it.
This is the reason for the scars
But didn't we create this?

 

Post A Comment! :: Send to a Friend!

• Feb. 19, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by musicfreak
hey...thanks for saying i'm talented...but that doesn't mean u aren't! i think what u just wrote is good...it's definitely got a good message in there...all i see wrong with it is u just need to rearrange and change a few words/ sentences to make it flow and sound more clear. but it's honestly pretty good. =D
good luck with the finals!
con carino,
~brianna~
Permanent Link

About Me

This is a silent song put on the internet. My life is not interesting, not a story for people to read, so I write my fiction and lines. Mostly this is just poetry, PLEASE don't leave me comments asking why I'm so depressed, or telling me I'm not close enough with God. I'm not even a little depressed, and my relationship with God is fine, thank you. But I do love comments, they make me all happy, so feel free to leave some. <br><br> Love.
Get your own countdown at BlingyBlob.com