RECENTLYIt was a dark night , mum had told me to get some wood from the shed for the fire,I didn't want at ALL. I argued for a while but then mum started threatening me, she said: get the wood or I'll take all your money! Hearing that I went to get the wood but I went very slowly still did it , just before I entered the shed I heard some heavy breathing and foot steps. I peeped around the corner just to meet a massive hunk of muscle, the monster i was looking at had big glowing red eyes(Something super natural) and wore rages but most of all he stunk! I wasn't sure weather I wanted to run or attack, as the giant watched every move I took he then said to me: I have come for you soul, and now it is time for me to collect it, it wouldn't have been to scary but he grunted it behind his big half broken teeth with saliva dripping from his mouth, I did not have a clue what he was saying. He saw I looked confused so He shouted: I WANT TO KILL YOU!, then I shouted I HATE YOU TO THE GUTS! I did not want to say that but my mouth just opened and said it. did not want to say that because I new he would get angry,and he did ,he reached for my neck and began to throttle me on the spot I needed to think of something very smart to say and do!
All right now what would you do or say? if you were in my situation, it dose not need to be long but it needs to be somthing. Then after I get every ones idear and get the best one and use it for the story then I will do more and so on. How dose that sound?
P.S I got the you make me frown(smile) thingo from dawn90.
Burger
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UMmm kick him in the stomach? (the monster guy)
GB~
sharla~
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sharla~
Okay, for your story: They should fight and then the kid pulls out a knife and slice the guy (not fatally) and then the guy runs away.
I don't know, that just what I think.
P.S. Your blog looks cool!
~Striker
And I don't have a licence or anything, I can only fly in a CAP airplane with a pilot instructing me.
~Striker