Defective Compositions

May. 13, 2006 - "None Other Than My Mother"

This is a poem that I wrote for Mothers Day.  It is (obviously) dedicated to my Mom.  Some of the lines don't quite rhyme, but I like it anyway.

 

There is a certain person,

In almost every human's life,

That made me what I am today,

And protects me from much strife.

 

This person wants to teach me,

To determine right from wrong,

Upon the path that God has set,

For me to travel on.

 

From baking yummy cookies,

To singing hymns all day,

This person is so special,

To me in every way.

 

With love that cannot ever end,

This woman tries to raise me,

To follow God throughout my life,

And to love everyone I see.

 

Although I often go astray,

We will always love each other.

This wonderful person in my life,

Is none other than my Mother!

 

 

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May. 13, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by 4evrHischild

What a beautiful poem and what a wonderful view you give others of your mom. Tell your mom to keep up the good work.

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May. 13, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by BlackRose

AWWW! *SNIIIF* I might have to steal that from you and pretend I wrote it for my mother! lol, I wouldn't do that, but I might write one myself, you are a insparation to me! lol.
ttyl,
~~Emi

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May. 18, 2006 - That was really good!

Posted by BeccaLoo

I loved that! I wish I was that talented! Talk to you later!

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May. 18, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by hiplvmom2

What a wonderful poem! You rock!

Yes you can use my "Fill in the blanks" for your web page... here is the link to where I found the questions... http://www.multifacetedmama.com/FFun/

Super Hugs,
Dana

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May. 19, 2006 - Hey!

Posted by Kekoa

Hey nice poem!! And nice back ground!! Keep up the good work.I think i have met your mom : )

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May. 20, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by laurenkjoyce

That's very pretty! Thanks for the comment. I once read Anne of Green Gables and I liked it. I'm not sure where we visited...I don't usually get that kind of stuff.
lauren

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May. 22, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by ritatubbs

Your poem has a wonderful message. Um...do you think you could teach my boys to be so thoughtful (and interested in writing)? Keep up the good work. I have a feeling you're going to go far.
Rita

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May. 30, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by ljcool

Thanks for commenting!! I did leave out the title but its called The Sea Serpent Series. I have to say that's probably my favorite passage from that book. Thanks again!!
tata for now!!

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