Nov. 1, 2006 - Another Poem
This is a poem that I wrote last Easter. I didn't think I had finished it, but when I showed it to Mommy, she liked it very much and asked me to put it on my blog, so here it is.
two men were led into sight.
One man mean and evil,
the other a symbol of light.
A man stood in a room that was full,
of people whose eyes were accusing.
Pilate who thought that he had the choice,
the Lord was doing the choosing.
Exchanged for a man who was wicked,
Jesus was sentenced to die.
The many people who loved him so,
could just stand there and softly cry.
He was mocked by the soldiers of Rome.
They cast lots for the clothes on his back.
He was gouged by a spear and nailed to a cross,
to make up for the goodness we lack.
By dying a hard and painful death,
He had the world's burden of sin on his shoulders,
and because he died, I was saved by grace,
and He will help me to lift life's boulders!
For me he died,
He died for me,
because he died,
I now live free!
Comments
Nov. 3, 2006 - Untitled Comment
Posted by sagerats
That, my dear, is a beautiful poem.
Abiding in the Vine!
Nov. 3, 2006 - Untitled Comment
Posted by Anonymous
Beautiful!Great job.
Susan
Nov. 3, 2006 - Awesome
Posted by tn3jcarter
What a beautiful way you told that story and what that story means for all of us. Wonderful, absolutely wonderful!
Nov. 3, 2006 - Untitled Comment
Posted by SandBetweenMyToes
What a wonderful poem. You have a gift of expressing yourself through beauty. Thank God for that gift, and don't be afraid to use it to bless others.
Letitia
Nov. 3, 2006 - beautiful
Posted by Sonya
Oh sweetie, that was wonderful! I was encouraged to remember the price he paid. Thank you for sharing that with us!
Blessings to you,
Sonya
Nov. 4, 2006 - wow
Posted by Jimmie
Your mom linked to your blog here and suggested we read your poem. Wow! I had no idea it would be so good! Excellent job, really! You are a talented poet!
PS who's means who is. Check that part..... :-)
Nov. 6, 2006 - The voice of God
Posted by Deeonly1
It is great to see how God speaks to us through so many ways. Your mom has a gift and so do you. They are different but both can be a voice from God.
Thank you for sharing and allow God to develop this gift. If you don't have a notebook that you carry get one and use it to write down the things that come to mind. Rememeber He speaks to us in a still small voice at times so take the time to capture them so you can go back and refer to them later.
Nov. 11, 2006 - Untitled Comment
Posted by kindnessandtruth2
That was a great poem you are a real good poet.
Bekah.
Nov. 18, 2006 - Untitled Comment
Posted by DancingFeet
That's a wonderful poem! The thought of what He did for us never ceases to amaze me.
Love,
Briana
Nov. 21, 2006 - Tag!
Posted by BeccaLoo
I'm tagging you. Here are the questions.
1. Where would you live in Narnia?
2. Which item would you like, A healing cordial, A bow arrow's and horn, or sword and shield?
3. Who would you want as your brother or sister, Lucy, Edmund, Susan, or Peter?
4. If you were King or Queen of Narnia what would you name be ( example- King
Edmund the just)?
5. What is your Favorite Narnia creature?
6. Who is your favorite Narnia hero?
7. What is your favorite Narnia scene?
8. What is your favorite Narnia book?
9. Who are you going to tag?
Nov. 23, 2006 - Untitled Comment
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