~~~Sample Part For Frantic Factory~~~
Tim and Holly both opened the large steel door. It's loud squeaking made the mice and rats chatter and scatter around. Tim examioned the old Factory,machines old and dusty and the doors all rusting. He breathed. "Holly,c'mere!" Holly quickly ran to his side. "What is it,Timmy?" He pointed at a much larger door,making all the others look puny. Holly gaped at it's incredible size,something just drawing them both to come and open it. Tim glared at her. "Ya think Mr. Toymaker will be pleased to find a couple of kids prowling through his Factory?" Holly frowned. "Do you think this is even HIS Factory?" He looked down. "I'm not sure. But it HAS to be! He IS a toymaker,right?" Holly tilted her head to the side,while gestoring her eyes to the left. "I suppose so..." Tim took her hand,saying-"C'mon!"-and led her to the door. However,when they stood infront of the massive door,sparkles started to come from the cracks on the sides and an eery presense entered in Tim and Holly. The whole Factory shook,violently. They glared at eachother,the door,which was actually two,started slowly opening. A set of dark colors showed on the other side: Purple,green,red,black,gray,blue,etc. Suddenly,a bright white light blinded Tim and Holly. They threw their arms over their eyes and a loud,high pitched humming rang in the air,all happening so fast to the Children,it all went black.
Tim opened his eyes slowly and studied the ceilene above him. There was something lumpy under him. He moved his hand around and felt what he thought was a body. Apparently,he was ontop of Holly,who seemed to be sleeping. But as Tim continued to study that ceilene,he found that it was unfamilar. Finally,he found the strength to get up and look around him. Tim helped himself sit up,but when he did,his mouth was quickly agape. All around him was a strange looking Factory of some kind. It was quite colorful and seemingly clever with certain clocks and machinary. Tim noticed certain figures that looked to be a little frightening in appearance. He shook Holly around. "Holly! Get up!" She opened her eyes. "What? What is it?" Tim grabbed her hand and swun her to her feet. "Look!" She rubbed her eyes and stared,gasping at the sight. "A Factory!" |