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May. 31, 2007

Omnibus II and "Little Bobby"

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Today I wrote an essay for Omnibus II on "What is the purpose of discipline?". In that essay I included a short story as an example for why discipline can protect you. I thought that I would post that story for you to read:

Little Bobby

 

 

Little Bobby was playing outside. He kicked his ball. He kicked his ball again. Little Bobby was having fun.

 

Little Bobby accidentally kicked his ball into the street. ‘Uh oh!’ thought Little Bobby. He started to walk into the street to get his ball. What Little Bobby did not notice was his mom, glaring over him. Little Bobby looked up at her with a cheesy smile.

 

“Little Bobby,” his mom said, “Get out of the street and go get a different ball. If you go back in the street again, I will discipline you.”

 

Little Bobby continued playing outside. He kicked his ball. He kicked his ball again. Little Bobby was having fun.

 

Little Bobby accidentally kicked his ball into the street. ‘Uh oh!’ thought Little Bobby. He started to walk into the street to get his ball. What Little Bobby did not notice was his mom, glaring over him. Little Bobby looked up at her with a cheesy smile.

 

“Little Bobby,” his mom said, “Get out of the street and come here.”

 

Little Bobby’s mom spanked Little Bobby.

 

“Now go get a different ball.” she said.

 

Little Bobby continued playing outside. He kicked his ball. He kicked his ball again. Little Bobby was having fun.

 

Little Bobby accidentally kicked his ball into the street. ‘Uh oh!’ thought Little Bobby. He started to walk into the street to get his ball. What Little Bobby did not notice was the eight-wheeled, “Hot Baby” monster truck ripping down the road, blaring rap all the way.

 

(choose your own ending from this point)

 

G-Rated Ending

Little Bobby looked up. It is too late. The monster truck hits Little Bobby.  Little Bobby is no more.

 

Little Bobby is dead because he did not learn from the discipline that his mom gave him.

 

Poor Little Bobby.

PG-13-Rated Ending

Little Bobby looked up. It is too late. SPLATCH! BUD-UMP! Blood and gore is everywhere.

 

Little Bobby is dead because he did not learn from the discipline that his mom gave him.

 

Poor Little Bobby.

 

I hope that this story taught you a lesson: we can pay serious consquences for not learning from the discipline that our parents give us. Let us not forget that and please, whatever you do, look both ways before you cross the street.

 

Until we meet again,

HRTF


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Jun. 26, 2007 - I tagged you

Posted by Tink92
1. Favorite car?
2. Ford or Chevy?
3. Favorite color?
4. Black or White?
5. Favorite restraint?
6. Ruby Tuesday or Chilies?
7. Favorite animal?
8. Cats or Dogs?
9. You’re Hero?
10. Country or City?
11. Favorite football team?
12. What is your middle name?
13. Favorite desert?
14. Chocolate or Vanilla?
15. Favorite Drink?
16. Mr. Pibb or Dr .Pepper?
17. Favorite band?
18. Mercy Me or Newsboys
19. What kind of guitar do you have?
20. Fender or Ibanez?
(Here’s one for the girls)
21. Jack or Will?
23. Favorite Movie?
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Jul. 31, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Bluejane
How about an E-Rated ending?

E-Rated Ending,
Little Bobby jumps out of the way just in time! He has learned his lesson the hard way and now as he sits in a hospital bed with a toe cast, he wishes he had listened to his mother.

Bluejane
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Aug. 9, 2007 - story

Posted by josh hopper
the g one should be rated pg this is how the g should go:then little bobby jumped out of the way and broke his arm on the road. then the moral
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