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-->| Feb. 22, 2008 Words of Love and Romance by Yours Truly... |
Are we lost in each other's eyes? A smile faint on her lips..fading even now We are fading. What are we waiting for? The End? The end is inevitable she sighs. If one thing is true...then i can not except this ending. I think forever will suffice me. Please don't leave. We can break this spell. Nothing is inevitable when my love is overwhelming. Have we fallen apart so fast? Such a thing as Fate cannot exist. Draw your eyes from the ground. Face me...oh Face Us. One thing is true..my love for you. My Love for you. We can break this. Fate is not inevitable when your smile overwhelms me. We can embrace this moment. Life as we live it. I need you. Need you to stay with me. Our love is inevitable. Some of this might look familiar to Someone...hehe. I just wrote it a few days ago so.... Opinions. <3
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| Feb. 22, 2008 - hey |
tis beautiful i hope it becomes a recognized song n i think i know who my secret admirer is now ;) |
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| Feb. 22, 2008 - song |
I love your song when i need a good break up song i will tell you kay
every one amber is like my best friend so im like cool just by nowing her lol.... |
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| Feb. 22, 2008 - Untitled Comment |
kool
i <3 that song thanks 4 the comment |
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| Feb. 23, 2008 - Untitled Comment |
That is REALLY COOL |
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| Feb. 23, 2008 - Untitled Comment |
awesome! |
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| Feb. 23, 2008 - Untitled Comment |
luv it
its beautiful =') |
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| Feb. 23, 2008 - Goog |
Very nicley thought out the lyrics don't contradict eachother lol most ppl have it to where the lyrics contradict each other its is very annoying ne ways god job ttyl |
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| Feb. 23, 2008 - Untitled Comment |
Very cool! I like way Much O! ;-)
Peace ambers! |
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| Feb. 23, 2008 - Untitled Comment |
-claps really loud- So good! So good! If only I could be as good as you! I'd give anything!*except pete wentz* |
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| Feb. 23, 2008 - Untitled Comment |
I LOVE IT!!!!
I've been working on a song like that... Well kinda... You've got a gift girl and it's from God! Great job on those lyrics... Have you considered becoming a singer? |
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| Feb. 23, 2008 - Untitled Comment |
Hey
Love you blog! Loved the poem too! |
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| Feb. 25, 2008 - Untitled Comment |
Sorry I haven't commented lately, I have been busy. Here is my new website: http://www.freewebs.com/myfathersdaughte92/ |
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| Feb. 26, 2008 - yo |
You don't know me, I don't know you, but I check your blog every now and then to read good poems and lyrics and junk. I write lyrics. And I take it you like music. Do you like FlyLeaf? I'm addicted to them.
And I saw Skillet in concert. Well, I guess I'll stop wasting your time. You can check my blog if you want. It's homeschoolblogger.com/Jazlynn. see ya. |
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| Jul. 10, 2008 - awesomeness |
That was really good! I enjoyed reading that. I posted some of my poems up a few days ago. SOme old some new.
:P XD JoJo |
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