• Dec. 15, 2008
My Homemake Apple Pie. YUMMY!
My dad bought apples so I decided to make apple pie.
My mom told me how to make the edges look pretty; last
time I made a pie I didn't make the edges look pretty.
Okay, now I am going to bake it.
Tada! The final product, it looks so good!
I think it looks like mountains with snow. My mom says it looks
like a crab with two eyes and its claws are in the sand. I agree!
I took all of these pictures except the one with me in it.
Comments
• Jan. 26, 2009
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Posted by Miss Kirsten
Dear Joy,
Not only am I impressed with your culinary expertise I am also excited about your skill with a camera! The first two pictures which show your ingredients do a nice job of displaying all the necessary components of the pie. Next, the picture of you in the kitchen with your pie gives us a glimpse of the setting. Then finally the two close-ups of your final product end the process. Sharing your pictures on a blog like this is much like writing a story with characters, setting, a beginning and an end. Nice job!
