• Mar. 2, 2009
The Light Across the River
Comments
• Mar. 4, 2009
Awesome Book Review!
Posted by TroopersForChrist
Lovely job on your book review. I have one question, please look up the word 'a wake' tell me if that should be one word or two in the context of this sentence? Get back to me and let me know. I think it is one word but I would like you to look it up and show me what a 'reference book' says about it. Remind me to record this in your school schedule book with a grade.
Sincerely,
Mrs. D-Ig
• Mar. 8, 2009
Book Review
Posted by Miss Kirsten
Dear Joy,
You continue to produce high quality book reviews that I am increasingly impressed with.
The first paragraph does a nice job of summarizing the main plot. The sentence structure is a bit choppy but you could probably fine tune that by eliminating the commas by rewording the paragraph into 2-3 separate sentences.
The second and third paragraphs of your essay introduce the book by giving a brief example of an important passage, an introduction to the Underground Railroad. This choice really helped me as a reader to visualize the main characters in my head. Excellent.
The third paragraph of your essay illustrates Johnny’s astonishment when he sees a real live slave. You illustrate Johnny’s character well in this segment.
The fourth paragraph starts out with leading questions that string the reader along – hopefully prompting him or her to check out the book from a local library. Lastly, you reflect upon what you have learned by reading this book. This is another great attribute of a well constructed book review.
Joy – You do a nice job of incorporating all the elements of style into your writing when you compose book reviews.



