Nov. 14, 2005 - Star Wars story
This is a story that I have written in my spare time. I have tried to keep the chapters short enough that it won't take up a lot of space.
STAR WARS
Jedi Academy
Chapter I
The lightsabers flashed as the two students fought on. They were both tired by the endless blocks and counter strikes, and still Yoda's most promising apprentices fought on. Anger and the spitefulness at each other fueled their strength and will to show the other who was the higher. Then as the two fought on, one was struck down by his opponents lightsaber. The duel over, Yoda came and said, " Good Carth, very good". Carth was the weaker of the two, but one of the top students , no doubt, under the apprenticeship of Yoda. The stronger of the two was named Canderis Ordo. He had been in Yoda's apprenticeship for almost seven years. Carth had been in Yoda's class almost three years. Both students were 13 years old and the most promising in Yoda's class. Yoda came to Carth after they had watched the other students practicing with their lightsabers and told him that there was going to be a new student chosen by the Jedi Master, Ki-Adi-Mundi, the very next day and it just might be one of them.
STAR WARS JEDI ACADEMY
CHAPTER II
The sun rose early on the capital of the Republic.Carth was moving around in the Jedi library reading of the Jedi of old. Then Carth's thoughts fell on what his future was to be and about the Jedi Master that was to come that day to pick a new student . Would he be chosen and have a chance to learn out in a Galaxy far far away, or would he be stuck looking at the maps in the library dreaming of the planets beyond. As these thoughts were in his mind Yoda came and stood beside him. Carth was about to greet the Jedi Master but Yoda spoke first, "Pateince you must have in this matter young Padawan. A great Jedi you will be." Carth then turned and said, "Master I am afraid I won't get to be Jedi Master Ki-Adi-Mundi's apprentice and I'll be stuck at the Jedi Temple and I won't pass the trial to become a Jedi Master myself." Yoda told Carth that he was going to see Ki-Adi-Mundi and persuade him to take Carth as his apprentice if he saw fit for it to be so. Yoda bid Carth to follow him out of the library to the room outside the Counsel Chamber while he discussed Carth's apprenticeship, with the other Jedi Masters, including Ki-Adi-Mundi.
STAR WARS JEDI ACADEMY
CHAPTER III
Minutes seemed like hours to Carth as the Jedi Masters decided his fate. Would he stay at the Jedi Temple to train under Yoda or train with Ki-Adi-Mundi far away on the planet Meegeeto?
After what seemed like forever to Carth, the Jedi Masters started dispersing one by one out of the counsel chamber. Yoda slowly walked up to Carth and introduced Carth to his new Jedi Master, Ki-Adi-Mundi. Carth was overwhelmed with joy that he should be the apprentice of Ki-Adi-Mundi, one of the leading Jedi Masters on the counsel. Ki-Adi-Mundi told Carth to prepare his things for the trip to the far away planet.
As Carth was packing, Yoda walked into his room. Yoda said, " See you, I will when you are a better Jedi than you are now." Yoda began to laugh in his own unique way. Carth gave his former master a warm hug and a hand shake and they walked down to the Jedi landing platform where Ki-Adi-Mundi was waiting. Then Yoda watched as the Jedi transport slowly lifted and turned toward the far away planet, Meegeeto.
Comments
Nov. 15, 2005 - Untitled Comment
Posted by laurenkjoyce
I think it is really great and can't wait to hear how Carth gets along!! Hope to hear more, you're a perfectional!!! lol (if that is even a word)
Thanks for the comment and being my friend!!!
until later
cya, lauren
Nov. 15, 2005 - kool
Posted by chimpzrool
this is pretty kool
Nov. 16, 2005 - Untitled Comment
Posted by ElvenMusician
Woah! That's so great! I love the way you wrote it. I love Star Wars too, it's always fun to write, but I could never write that good. Keep writing!
God Bless,
Tarellethiel
Nov. 14, 2007 - Cool Story
Posted by Altariel
Nice, this sounds real interesting!
One thing though, you said "Anger and the spitefulness at each other feuled their strength", and isn't anger the path to the dark side? I thought jedi were not supposed to be angry ever...
Well, cool anyway.
Altariel
