Dec. 18, 2005 - Another chapter! yeah!!
Sorry I haven't posted a chapter in forever!!! Again as I have said before read the other 3 chapters before reading this one so that you will be familiar with the story.
Any way here it is!
Star Wars
Jedi Academy
Chapter IV
Carth and Ki-Adi-Mundi were just getting to know one another in deep space on the Outer Rim when there was a explosion across the top of the transport. They, along with others, jumped to their feet at the sound. Ki-Adi-Mundi ran for the control Bridge with Carth behind him.When they got there they looked out along top of the transport. There was a battle blazing over head. Ki-Adi-Mundi turned to the Captain and said, "we are but a little away from Megeeto if you can just get us there." The Captain replied, "The shields are almost down we'll never make it". Adi-Mundi replied, "Try to make it. If we get there we're close enough that the fighters can make it to the space port on the fuel they have". The Captain gave the command to head full speed toward the planet. Meanwhile the battle overhead raged on! There were many losses to the Republic but just as many to the lifeless droids that they were fighting. They soon left the heat of the battle.The ship which was on fire, safley landed on the surface of Megeeto. They evacuated the transport and the fire cruisers put out the flames. They received a call over the comm unit and it said, "This is Red leader. We've done it! There are no more droids up here ,over." The control tower operator said, "Roger Red leader good going!"
Carth asked Adi-Mundi where they were going to stay and when he would start his training under his new Master. Adi-Mundi just replied, "Soon."
Well there it was what did you think? Feel free to give me any suggestions on the next chapter that you would like to see in it!
Later,
Jedi Z
Comments
Dec. 20, 2005 - Untitled Comment
Posted by Hutcheson
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Dec. 21, 2005 - Untitled Comment
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Dec. 21, 2005 - Untitled Comment
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Great Chapter. Can't Wait Until The Next One.
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Dec. 24, 2005 - Untitled Comment
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Dec. 27, 2005 - Untitled Comment
Posted by ljcool
I really love it!!! I started kinda getting nervous when they were in the spacebattle but I'm ok now. As for the other chapter...I just hope it is as good as the last 4!!! GOOD LUCK!!
until later
cya, lauren
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