Feb. 12, 2009 - rain rain go away...
this is a poem i wrote..umm tell me what you think?? plz...thnx u.
She stands alone, as the rain falls. remembering. she begins to cry. it all fell apart. right before her eyes. to quickly to stop it. she didnt know it would end this way. everything seemed just fine. but she made the mistake. she is to blame
He looks at her. a look of pain. he LOVED her. but she messed it up. she's to blame but he doesn't wana let her go. he does LOVE her. she is all he ever wanted. she is what he was waiting for, but it wasn't suppose to end this way. he never expected this.
She walks toward him. but he starts to leave. he made up his mind. his love has faded. she cries.. why does this happen to me?? i LOVE him but i hurt him. im sorry. to take it all back. never falling in love, would it help?? just to forget the love she has for him. but its painfull. nothing can make this pain go away.
he didn't wana leave. but it was the only choice. he had to live HIS life. meaning letting her go. he LOVED her...
SO IT RAINS.....
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Feb. 13, 2009 - Untitled Comment
Posted by REBELXTi
This is really good...
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