My Imagination

Oct. 3, 2006

Chapter One

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  Once upon a time there was a boy.  I am that boy. My name is Peter. I was on a ship called The Lady Of The Sea.  One morning, as usual, I got out of my bed and went to my closet. I put on an orange shirt and pair of blue pants then I looked into my mirror: black hair, blue eyes, and white skin. I am fourteen years old.

 

  I went outside to look for my brother Ted.  Ted is eight and has brown hair and eyes.  My mother and father are on another ship.  Then I saw Ted with a few slices of bread looking happy, so I ran over to him.  When I asked him what he did, he said he asked an old man if he could have a loaf of bread so the old man gave him the bread.  Just as we finished the bread, a storm broke out!  Then we heard the Captain shout out, "Everyone get in your cabins!"  So I ran to the cabin dragging Ted behind me!  Then someone shouted, "Launch the dories!"

 

  That's when I looked back and saw that a lightening strike had caused the ship to catch fire. Still dragging Ted who had fainted, I ran to the nearest dory and threw myself and Ted in. That's when I noticed that there were two or three sailors in the dory.  So I fainted knowing I would be safe.

 

 

  To be continued.....

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Oct. 14, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Anonymous
your totally not nine I can tell from the punctuation that you are like fourteen or something
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Oct. 17, 2006 - Hi

Posted by Will7
I have added you to my friends list. Do you have hurricanes or alligators in your area? We went to Florida 2 years ago for a wedding but a hurricane chased us out. Soon we will get snow. Do you ever go to the beach and find coconuts? We all love the ocean. We went there for 2 weeks this past summer (in NC and VA.)
We went to Assateague and saw some Chincoteague ponies. What kind of horses do you have?
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Oct. 31, 2006 - Hi

Posted by Al
I like that story. I cant wait to see what the other part of it is.
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Nov. 14, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Jocelyndixon
Hello there!
Thanks for stopping by! I think you have some talent!

Where did you find your Elven name? Mine is Alatariel (al-a-tar-ree-el)...

I welcome you always, Elf-kin!

Mαra mesta,

Edhλl σ Loriλn

Daughter of JacqueDixon, and sister of SuperAngel, Tigerlily the Hobbit and Young Man in Training

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