Apr. 26, 2008

New Story

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I am going to start a new story on my blog. I know, I know I'm crazy. 2 stories on my blog and one off. I will keep posting Motherhood at Ten. The story is called The Promise Ring. My main character's name is Crystal Penning. Here is her character chart.

 

NAME Crystal Penning

 

PHYSICAL TRAITS  She is 14. Long blonde hair. Narrow face with brown eyes. Her skin is smooth and her face is freckled.

 

CHARACTER TRAITS She is kind, creative, dependable, and diligent, but she is also fearful, stubborn, and thinks about her appearance too much.

 

LIKES & DISLIKES She likes keeping house for her father. She loves to read, especially her Bible, and do crafts. She likes to chew on her hair when she is thinking. She dislikes talking in front of people and going to school.

 

Here is the summary.

 

               The Promise Ring

When Crystal Penning's mother dies her world comes crashing down. She has to endure the pressures of running a household and she must keep her promise to her mother that she would not be tainted by the worldly influence that she will  face at public school.

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Apr. 26, 2008 - Oh, my!

Posted by skmarlow
This is so good! I'm thrilled that you are taking what you learned in the WW and are applying it to another story. May I use this as an example when I teach this workshop next fall at the homeschool co-op? It is an excellent example of lessons "sticking."

I like how she chews on her hair. Your summary is great and I look forward to watching this story unfold in the coming days and weeks. Thanks for putting me on your e-mail notification!

p.s. Sorry, but you didn't win the book and the beanie baby over at my Circle C blog. You can go over there and see who DID win, if you want.

Edited by skmarlow on Apr. 26, 2008 at 6:57 PM
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Posted by skmarlow
And what about the rest of it? Your e-mail to me? The certificate? What do you want me to do?
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Apr. 26, 2008 - Yikes!

Posted by skmarlow
This is what happens when you get so many students in your writing class that you can't keep track of them! LOL (And when they all post comments on the same day).

For a brief moment, I thought I was commenting on Luthien's blog! She finished the WW and I was trying to find out what she wanted to do now, since she's not going to be blogging for the rest of the summer. And what I should do about her certificate.

So, you can get a laugh out of this case of mistaken identity! ROTFL

I'm going crazy! :-)
But it's fun!

Edited by skmarlow on Apr. 26, 2008 at 9:24 PM
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