Sep. 5, 2008

1st Young Writers Lounge

The first assignment for the writing lounge is to write a poem about my favorite season here it is. (I'm not much of a poet)

 

                                                                Winter Magic

                              Winter is a when snow comes and icicles drip 

                              And children play blithely with silvery laughter

                              Then when they are done hot cocoa sip

                                         And wish they could do it forever and ever.

 

 

                                          One of the most fun things is to ski

                                          To feel yourself glide across snow so smoothly

                                           And have the wind whip across me

                                            For winter is the best season of all

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Sep. 5, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by YoungWriters4Jesus
Hi there!

Your poem was superb! It was enjoyable to read, and it portrayed the season perfectly. You also used some good vocabulary words, which added to the meaning of your poem.

Thanks for participating, and don't forget to check back on Sunday for our next assignment.

Kylie & Ashley
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Sep. 6, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by BookLover
Hello!
I did this too but I didn't write a new poem because I don't really have a favorite season. I just gave them the link for my old poem on winter. I think winter was picked the most!
I can't wait for more of your story!
Amy
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Sep. 13, 2008 - Hey

Posted by caitlyn98
I love your blog it is so cool!
Caitlyn
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