The first assignment for the writing lounge is to write a poem about my favorite season here it is. (I'm not much of a poet)
Winter Magic
Winter is a when snow comes and icicles drip
And children play blithely with silvery laughter
Then when they are done hot cocoa sip
And wish they could do it forever and ever.
One of the most fun things is to ski
To feel yourself glide across snow so smoothly
And have the wind whip across me
For winter is the best season of all |
Sep. 5, 2008 - Untitled Comment
Your poem was superb! It was enjoyable to read, and it portrayed the season perfectly. You also used some good vocabulary words, which added to the meaning of your poem.
Thanks for participating, and don't forget to check back on Sunday for our next assignment.
Kylie & Ashley