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Aug. 27, 2008

The Promise Ring Chapter 7

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If you haven't read the beginning of the book start with Chap. 1

Chapter 7

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                Crystal watched in terror as the car barreled down at her.  She glanced around and realized that she couldn't get out of the way. On one side of her the car blocked her escape, on the other there was a wall.

 

                The car came closer and closer, its brakes screeching as the driver attempted to stop the car. The car finally managed to come to a halt, inches from Crystal.

 

                Crystal felt her legs weaken and she fell to the ground. She heard several car doors slam and slipped into unconsciousness.

 

 

 

 

 

                Crystal woke lying on a couch in her house. She groaned and sat up.

 

                "Well I am glad to see that you are awake," came Miss Fanny's concerned voice. "Are you sure you are alright?"

 

                "Yes," Crystal replied. "And I am not going to stay on this couch all day."

 

                Miss Fanny nodded, "Alright. Perhaps we cou-

 

                Mary cut her off. "Could we play a game?"

 

                "Sure," Crystal said grinning. "But not on the couch!"

 

                Mary and Miss Fanny laughed with her and sat down to play a game.

 

 

 

 

                Later when Miss Fanny and Crystal were preparing dinner, Mary came up to the former and said, "Miss Fanny, could you come listen to me read?"

 

                "Go ahead," Crystal said. "There isn't much left to do."

 

                Miss Fanny and Mary seated themselves on the couch and opened a small book.

 

                As Crystal heard Mary read the words haltingly she smiled. She walked over to the opening that led to the room the others were in.

 

                She studied the scene before her. Mary sat curled up next to Miss Fanny, her head leaning against the latter's shoulder. Miss Fanny had her arm around Mary's shoulder and was listening intently to her.

 

                Crystal felt her throat tighten and a muffled sob broke through her lips. Mary didn't notice and kept reading, but Miss Fanny glanced quickly up and gave Crystal a questioning look.

 

                Crystal whirled around as tears stung her eyes and choked back another sob. She worked feverishly at the meal.

 

                Once the food was in the oven she called out, "Everything is in the oven so let's finish that game."

 

               

 

                The rest of the evening Crystal noticed that Miss Fanny was looking at her strangely. Mary however prattled on happily.

 

 

                After Mary had gone to bed Miss Fanny and Crystal sat down and chatted.

 

                Suddenly Miss Fanny asked her, "What was the matter when Mary was reading?"

 

                Crystal sighed, "It just kind of took me back. Mama and I used to read together like that."

 

                Miss Fanny said, "Go on."

 

                "I would rather not. It is just too-," her voice trailed off.

 

                "Sometimes it helps to talk. Tell me about it."

 

                When I was about Mary's age Mama came to me and told me that we were going to start reading together in the mornings. So the next morning we sat down and began what has been my favorite book since then. It was Caddie Woodlawn. Of course she was a little to tom-boyish for my liking but I suppose I am getting off the subject.

 

                We would sit and dramatize it as we read. We loved to just pick a person and talk for that person as we thought that person would speak. We kept doing it with other books until-until," her eyes filled with tears and she turned away, unable to continue.

 

                "Why don't you do something like that with Mary," Miss Fanny suggested. "I am sure she would love it."

 

                Crystal wiped her tears and said, "Well Mary isn't exactly what you would call an avid reader."

 

                "It doesn't matter. She would be glad that you took the effort to do it with her. She really looks up to you and wants you to do things with her."

 

                Crystal laughed shakily, "How do you know things like that?"

 

                "You forget that I was once a youngest child, too."

 

                "Alright. I'll do it."

               

                "Come on, let's go to bed," Miss Fanny said yawning.

 

                Crystal ascended the stairs with a peaceful heart. Miss Fanny was there and everything was okay.

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Aug. 1, 2008

The Promise Ring Chapter 6

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I was hoping to get this posted this morning but we had a wheat weevil problem. In case you haven't read the rest of the story start here with Chap. 1 

 

Chapter 6

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                The next day after breakfast Crystal picked up the phone and dialed the number of a woman that her father had asked to look after the girls while he was gone.

 

                "Hello, this is Miss Carter."

 

                "Hello, Miss Fanny. This is Crystal."

 

                "Oh, good morning Crystal. How are you and Mary?" came the sweet voice of Miss Fanny Carter.

 

                "We are fine. Listen, I was wondering if you had time to take us to the store today. We are running a little short on groceries and," she said lowering her voice, "I want to stop by the craft store to see what I can find to make Mary for her birthday."

 

                "Sure, I have plenty of time today. How about I pick you up at ten?"

 

                "That will be good. I will see you then. Thank you, goodbye."

 

                "Goodbye, dear."

 

                Crystal smiled as she hung up the phone. She loved the older woman. Miss Fanny Carter was single and about sixty. She had a beautiful infectious smile and a very sweet personality.

 

                "Mary," she called. "Miss Fanny is coming in thirty minutes to take us to the store."

 

                Mary came tumbling down the stairs. "Really? I love Miss Fanny."

 

                "Well then I expect you to look presentable. Go upstairs and brush your hair and change into your red jumper and put your white shirt under it."

 

                Crystal shook her head and smiled as Mary raced back up the stairs.

 

               

 

 

                When Miss Fanny pulled up in her car a little later, Crystal and Mary were ready to hop into the car.

               

                As Crystal slid into the front passenger seat she smiled at the older woman.

 

                "So where do you need to go today, Crystal?" Miss Fanny asked.

 

                Crystal ticked off the list of stores on her fingers.

 

                "My, I am glad I am not doing the shopping. If it is alright with you I would prefer to stay in the car with Mary," Miss Fanny said as she swept her long hair aside. She had beautiful, grey hair, and unlike most women her age kept it long and flowing.

 

                As they drove along Mary amused them with her constant prattling. After awhile she grew silent so Crystal and Miss Fanny conversed quietly together.

 

                Crystal looked up to Miss Fanny a great deal. She had been attending their church since Crystal had been born. She had helped Mrs. Penning around the house when Crystal was little.

 

                "How have you girls been doing?" Miss Fanny asked tenderly.

 

                "Alright. It's kinda hard, but we are getting by."

 

                "You just let me know if you want me to come over and spend the night sometime."

 

                "Thanks," Crystal said with a smile.

 

                "Crystal, what are you talking about?" Mary said inquisitively.

 

                "Miss Fanny just suggested that she come over sometime soon. She might even stay the night."

 

                "Oh Miss Fanny that would be so wonderful. Could you come tonight?"

 

                "Crystal?" Miss Fanny asked.

 

                "I would love to have you if you can come."

 

                "Alright. But you have to let me help you with dinner," was the smiling woman's reply.

 

                "You have to come next week for my birthday, too," Mary insisted.

 

                "I wouldn't miss it for the world."

 

                "Crystal is going to the craft store to find my present."

 

                "Mary! How do you always know?"

 

                "I can tell by the way you act."

 

                Miss Fanny pulled to a stop in front of the store. Crystal swung open her door and exited the car still chuckling at Mary.

 

                Suddenly she heard Miss Fanny scream, "Crystal, look out."

 

                Startled she looked up and saw a car barreling down on her, only fifteen feet away from her. She stood paralyzed, unable to run.

 

               

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Jul. 18, 2008

The Promise Ring Chapter 5

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If you haven't read the rest of the story start with Chap. 1

Chapter 5

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                The girls sat in silence for awhile as they listened intently to the weatherman. The tornado was only a few miles from Carrville when they heard the meteorologist say, "Well it looks like the storm is dissipating."

                Crystal breathed a sigh of relief and said, "Well I guess we can go to bed now."

 

                As she ascended the stairs Crystal thought, "This has been one of the most exhausting nights of my life."

 

                "Crystal," Mary said. "I don't want to go to school tomorrow. I am so tired."

 

                "I know. So am I."

 

                The girls wearily climbed the stairs and crawled back into their beds.

 

 

 

The next morning Crystal's alarm clock began its normal ritual of beeping her awake. Her hand hit the snooze button and she rolled over and groaned.  

 

                She rose slowly from her bed when she heard the ringing of the phone. She leapt out of bed, knowing that it must be something important.

 

                Looking at her Caller I.D. she noted that the call was from her school.

 

                "Hello this is the Penning residence, may I help you?" she asked, picking up the phone.

 

                "Yes this is Carrville Public Schools we are calling to inform you that our electrical system was knocked out so we are canceling school today. It should be back in order by Monday."

 

                Crystal could hardly contain her relief. "Thank you for calling. Goodbye."

 

                Crystal staggered back to her room and soon was asleep again.

 

 

               

 

                Crystal awoke again to sunlight streaming in her window and Mary urgently shaking her.

 

                "Crystal, Crystal."

 

                "What is it," Crystal muttered.

 

                "It is 10:00. Did you oversleep? Oh we are going to be soooo late."

 

                "Mary it's alright. They called this morning and said they were canceling school because of some electrical problems."

 

                "Oh. I was so scared. Mrs. Cally becomes very angry when anybody is late."

 

                Crystal rolled her eyes. They had never had to worry about that when they were homeschooled if they had a valid reason for starting late.

 

 

                "Crystal I am hungry," Mary said. Her stomach made a growling noise and the girls burst into laughter.

 

                "Alright I will go make breakfast."

 

                Crystal hastily dressed and entered the kitchen, as she found that she, too, was ravenously hungry.

 

                Crystal decided that since that day was sort of a holiday she would make some coffeecake.  She was reaching up to the cupboard to grab the cookbook, when she saw her reflection in the smooth surface of the oven.

 

                She paused for a moment and stood admiring herself. She loved her pretty, narrow face, although the light sprinkling of freckles across her nose gave her a bit of exasperation.

 

                Her eyes turned to her hair and she smiled. Here was one thing that she could not find any fault with. Her hair flowed gracefully down her back until it ended just below her waist. It was honey-blonde and had a slight wave to it. As Crystal stood looking at her hair a unpleasant scene came to her.

               

                She hurriedly acquired the cookbook, flipped it to the right page, and began cooking, trying to push the memory from her mind. But it kept coming back. So finally when the food was in the oven she allowed herself to be drawn into the reverie.

 

               

 

 

                Crystal and her parents were standing in the living room talking heatedly.

 

                "No," Crystal half-shouted. "I won't."

 

                Her parents had suggested that she cut her hair short and send it to a place like Locks of Love. She had quickly responded that she would never want to do something like that.

 

                They had asked her why and she said that she liked her hair long. They pursued it and she had finally shouted, "No, I won't."

 

                "Crystal, nobody can make you cut your hair. In fact we would be very happy if it could be your own decision," her father said.

 

                "But it would look terrible if it was short. I don't want to look ugly."

 

                "Crystal. It wouldn't make you ugly, which brings me to another thing your father and I have meant to talk to you about for awhile. You are becoming vain, Crystal," her mother said. "You look a good deal like me and, I confess, I struggled some with vanity when I was younger."

 

                "But, but-"

 

                "We just want you to think about it and start working on it alright."

 

                "Alright," Crystal said softly. "But I still am not ready to cut my hair."

 

                Mrs. Penning sighed. "That is okay. We would just like to know that you are working on it. Can you do that for us?"

 

                Crystal nodded tearfully.

 

               

 

               

                Crystal was snapped back into reality by the realization that her coffeecake was beginning to burn. She rushed to the oven and drew it carefully out. As she cut pieces for herself and Mary she thought over what she had remembered. It was now just a few months after the conversation, but oh so much had changed.

 

                She knew that she was vain, but whenever she thought about doing something like cutting her hair short to give to other kids who needed wigs something in her just rebelled.

 

                She wasn't happy that her parents wanted her to cut it as she rarely had quarreled with them.

 

                Pushing the thought from her mind she called, "Mary, breakfast is ready."

 

 

                                                                    [Read Chapter 6]

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Jul. 10, 2008

Andi

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Wow! Well as I said I was hoping to finish and have the next chapter of my Andi story posted while I was on my trip, but alas, I failed. But now I have finished and Mrs. Marlow has posted the 5th chapter of Andi---Lost. You can read it here. 

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Jun. 25, 2008

The Promise Ring Chapter 4

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If you haven't read the rest of the story start with Chap. 1

Chapter 4

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                Crystal and Mary ate their dinner in silence. After dinner Crystal tried to lift Mary's spirits by playing a game with her.

               

 

               

                "Crystal," Mary said as they lay on the floor.

 

                "Yes?" was the absent and troubled reply.

 

                "Is something the matter? You aren't paying attention to the game."

 

                "What.. oh I'm sorry. I guess I just miss Daddy is all." With that she tried to turn her attention to the game. She talked and laughed but as it neared bedtime she grew nervous. She was tempted to delay bedtime but she knew that her father would want her to go to bed at the usual time.

 

                "Come on Mary, we need to go to bed."

 

                Mary made a face and slowly moved to clean up the game. At any other time Crystal would have told her to hurry but tonight she didn't want to go to bed any more than Mary. When Mary was finally ready to go up the stairs Crystal followed her with a heavy heart.

 

               

 

 

                After she had prepared for bed Crystal sat in front of her mirror brushing her hair.

 

                "Crystal," she heard Mary say by her side.

 

                Crystal jumped, "Yes."

 

                "Where do you think Daddy is right now?"

 

                "He is probably on the plane on his way to the airport," Crystal said as her fingers deftly braided her hair.

 

                "What do you think he is doing right now?"

 

                At this time of night he is probably sleeping," Crystal said a bit exasperated. "Now you need to go to bed."

                                                                                                                                                                         

                As the little girl moved to obey she said, "I miss him."

 

                Crystal rose from her seat and hugged Mary. "So do I," she whispered.

 

                Mary flashed a smile at her and dashed off to bed.

 

                Crystal reseated herself and finished her braid.

 

                She stood up and surveyed her beautiful nightgown. Her mother had made it for her, which made it doubly beautiful in Crystal's eyes. Her eyes misted as she fingered the soft, cream material.

 

                With a sigh she turned off her light and climbed into bed.

 

                She lay there for a few moments and then her eyelids slowly closed and she fell asleep.

 

 

 

 

                Suddenly a slight noise awakened her. She listened intently for a few minutes and she heard it again; a low creaking sound.

 

                Crystal slid out of her bed and grabbed her flashlight. She crept carefully down the stairs shaking with fright. She checked all the locks on the doors and, satisfied that there wasn't anyone in the house, sank into a chair. She took a couple of deep breaths and ascended the stairs.

 

                As she climbed back in to bed she still felt nervous and after reading a little bit of her Bible to help her go back to sleep, she again fell asleep.

 

               

 

                Suddenly she was awakened by a flash of light followed immediately by a loud BOOOOM that shook the house. She burrowed under her covers and looking over at her door, to her horror saw it open ever so slowly.

 

                Crystal screamed and buried her head under her pillow.

 

                "Crystal, it's me," she heard Mary's say.

 

                Crystal sat up and said, "What do you need?"

 

                "The storm woke me and I'm scared. Can I sleep with you?"

 

                "Sure," Crystal said pulling back the covers. "Get in."

 

                The little girl climbed into the bed and snuggled up to her big sister.

 

                As flashes of lightning and sounds of thunder and pounding rain went on outside, Crystal started to become nervous. "Mary I think that we should probably go down to the basement."

 

                The girls left the bed and grabbed some blankets to keep them warm.

 

                The Pennings had a finished basement with a television and some sofas. Crystal and Mary curled up on one of them and covered themselves thickly with blankets. Crystal clicked the remote and turned the TV to the weather channel.

 

                The weatherman was saying, "-e now do believe that there is a tornado on the ground right now in Carlstown that is headed toward Phillipsburg and then it should hit Carrville-"

 

                "Crystal," Mary exclaimed, "That is where we live."

 

                "I know. Shhhh."

 

                "This is one of the worst storms I have ever seen in my career of meteorology."

                

                The girls suddenly heard an extremely loud boom of thunder and then there was a sharp crack. Mary screamed when a loud boom was heard and the ground shook.

 

                "Shhh, it's okay," Crystal soothed her. "A tree was probably struck by lightning."

 

                The sounds of the storm became louder and fiercer and the meteorologist started to become more excited.

 

 

                Crystal held Mary close and attempted to keep her rising terror from showing. She shivered and looked around her. Could all this be gone in a few minutes?

 

 

 

 

 

[Read Chapter 5]
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Jun. 13, 2008

The Promise Ring Chapter 3

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If you missed the beginning of the story you can read Chapter 1 here.

Chapter 3

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               Crystal walked into school the next day with a bulging binder in her book bag.  She had stayed up long into the night printing information and categorizing it in a binder. Mr. Dakins had said that they could bring any materials that they needed to help them in class.

 

                The class began with the students dragging themselves in and preparing to be bored out of their minds.  

 

                "Alright class. Today's lecture is about the origin of the earth. As we all know 8 billion years ago there was a huge explosion and over millions of years life formed."

 

                Crystal raised her hand, "Sir, were you there?"

 

                He coughed. "Well all respected scientists say that it happened that way."

                                                     

                "Were they there?" she repeated.

 

                "Well everybody knows that-"

 

                "Sir you still haven't answered my question."

 

                "Crystal Penning, you are being disruptive. Sit down."

 

                Crystal sat down amid the titters of the class.

 

                Slightly shaken, the teacher continued his talk. Occasionally he would glance disapprovingly over at Crystal.

 

                As for Crystal she was amazed that she had had the courage to stand up and question him.

 

                After class a student came up to her and said, "Wow, you sure livened up that class. We all expected to be like sooo bored.  You sure changed that."

 

               

 

               

 

                When Crystal arrived home she found her father hastily packing a suitcase.

 

                "What is it Daddy? I thought your leave lasted for another week?

 

                "There was some sort of mix-up. They need me back now."

 

                Jason Penning was a pilot who worked for a commercial airline. He was one of their best pilots so he would often be gone from home for long periods of time.

 

                Crystal swallowed hard. "So we will have to be home alone for awhile?"

 

                He walked over to her and gave her a hug. "I know it will be hard, honey, but the Lord will give you strength."

 

                He continued packing while Crystal started making dinner. She was scared. She was secretly terrified of being left home alone. She was glad that she would have Mary to keep her company, but she knew that there would be times when Mary would not be there.

 

                Also she worried about her father. Anything could happen on a plane. She knew that the Lord was in control but she still couldn't keep herself from worrying. Before the tragedy had happened her mother's rock solid faith had been there for Crystal to lean on. Now Crystal would have to endure the strain alone.

               

                "No not alone," Crystal chided herself. "I will have Jesus Christ to strengthen and guide me."

 

 

 

 

                Later that evening when her father left she did her best to fight back tears. As he held her in a bone-crushing embrace he whispered in her ear, "Be strong. Trust in the Lord."

 

                He knelt down by Mary and said, "You listen to Crystal, Mary. In my absence she will be in charge."

 

                The little girl nodded her head and sniffed.

 

                Crystal watched him climb into his car and smiled weakly as she waved goodbye to him.

[Read Chapter 4]

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May. 18, 2008

The Promise Ring Chapter 2

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Here is the second chapter of The Promise Ring. If you missed the first chapter you can read it here

 

CHAPTER 2

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               Crystal stood in front of her mirror br