ok I think I finally got this computer to behave it's self and
let me post stuff I type up in Word!
please tell me if some more problems come up with this
post. thanks a bunch!
Lesson 12-
Mrs. Marlow gave us a paragraph that we are supposed
to indent properly
So here it goes!
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Original paragraph:
“Batter-up! We haven’t got all day!” Tom shouted.
“Stop yelling,” Katie said.
she grabbed the bat and scowled at her brother. He scowled
back. “No girls,”
Sean piped up from the pitchers mound. “ What do you
care? She’s not on your
team,” Tom snapped. Sean glared at Katie for a moment,
then shrugged. “Suit
yourself. But I’m not going easy on her just ‘cause she’s
a girl.” “Who’s asking
you to?” Katie said. “Play ball!”
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My Version:
“Batter-up! We haven’t got all day!” Tom shouted.
“Stop yelling,” Katie said. She grabbed the bat &
scowled at her brother. He scowled back.
“No girls,” Sean piped up from the pitchers mound.
“What do you care? She’s not on your team,” Tom snapped.
Sean glared at Katie for a moment, then shrugged. “Suit yourself.
But I’m not going easy on her just ‘cause she’s a girl.”
“who’s asking you to?” Katie said. “Play ball!”
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Wow I looked at the answers after I was done and
I think I got 100%!
Tell me what you think of it!
Thanks! | 
And yes, you got the MindTrap answers correct. Good work!
I was gone all week last week teaching at a young authors conference. I will put up pictures tomorrow and share the fun--I'll probably put the post up on both the WW blog and the SS blog.
Now I'm off to read your chapter 1 part 2. But where is ch. 1 part 1? You need to put me on your "notify mailing addresses" so I have a link when you add more to your story. Tell your friends to go over here and read this, so they can also tell me about when they update their stories:
http://www.homeschoolblogger.com/WritingWorkshop/503152/