Okay I did this for a school assignment and it turned out really well so I thought I'd post it here!
Strong Metaphors
“His mind was an angry sea, full of torment and sorrow lashing wildly against all reason.”
“Life is a melody, joyful at times and terrible at others. Who can say how long any one song will last before it is cut off?”
“The girl was a possum, curling up into a ball at the first sign of danger, her friend, however, was a wounded bear, snarling viciously at those who threatened the defenseless possum.”
“The dirty dishes were a mountain of waste and work looming ahead of her, seeming a plague upon her day.”
“The lass bounced up and down, unable to contain her joy which was evident everywhere, it was a breeze softly stirring her hair and setting the flowers to dancing, a whirl of colors, a bird singing merrily above her, and a gentle whisper.”
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I haven't been around much. I've been SO busy. I finished Book 5, The Trouble with Treasure. Trying to revise so I can send in to my editor next week.