Princess of the Mountain

Oct. 24, 2007

Lesson 4 - Character sketch - updated

This is the fourth lesson of the Writing Workshop put on by Suzy Scribbles.  I am supposed to make a character sketch of each of my characters.  Here is the first one about Alice Mozzie.  I will add to this one character each day until I have done all of them.

 

Alice Mozzie is a 14 year old girl and the middle daughter of a rich country family.  She lives on the prairie on a farm with many high cliffs.  She has short, black, curly hair.  She has greenish, blueish eyes.  She is a pretty young lady with clear skin.  She is a lucky girl who listens to her parents.  Her friends like her because she is kind, trusting and truthful.  However, because she is the only girl in her family, she is spoiled a bit and likes to get her own way.  She loves to ride on Angel, who is a golden eagle.  She likes make-up and singing.  She is afraid of rock slides because she lost one of her favorite colts to one when she was nine.

 

Angel is a seven year old golden eagle that has three chicks.  She is  as big as an Australian Shepherd dog.  She fights anything bad around her and Alice.  Angel lives on a high cliff near other cliffs near a prairie where Alice lives.  She loves Alice tries to take care of her and her chicks.  She loves flying all over the prairie and cliffs.  When Mr.  Aim comes, she deosn't like to be trapped by one of his nets or have her chicks taken away by Mr. Aim.

 

Henry Jones  is 19 years of age.  He has blond hair and loves Alice.  Henry has brown eyes and is hansome.  He's a strong, tall young man.  He is loyal to Alice, kind, brave and obedient.  Likes to help everyone in need of help.  Likes to talk to animals and LOVES Alice.  Hates Mr. Aim and losing Alice.  Also dislikes forest fires because he's afraid Alice might be in one.

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Oct. 30, 2007 - I'm so excited!

Posted by SuzyScribbles
I am so excited to read these character sketches on Alice, Henry, and her eagle Angel. You have described them so well so I feel like I know them. I can't wait to read your story.
Excellent work, MP.
NOTE: I didn't know you had posted until your mom mentioned something about it. You MUST leave a comment whenever you sign Mr. Linky. You may go back to the lesson and sign Mr. Linky as many times as you want as you update, but I do not know you have done the assignment until you post a new comment. I get an e-mail and then can go to the site and find your work.
Please remember! I want to read more.
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