A Homeschool Story Writer
Tuesday 4 March 2008
The Wolf and the Troublemaker Chapter 11 The Last Battle

 

 

The Wolf and the Troublemaker

Chapter 11

The Last Battle

“That’s right, I’m Mitch and I’m going to get my revenge on you!”

“But Mitch, breaking your toy truck was an accident”- “You broke ALL my stuff!”

“But Mitch I’ve changed now.”

“I DON’T CARE!”  he screamed.

Just then, Mitch held a gun to El Diablo’s parents.

“NOOOO!” shouted El Diablo.

El Diablo used his sword to cut the ropes off.

"Go! I’ll take care of Mitch," said El Diablo.

“You're dead runt!” said Mitch.

He tied up El Diablo and pointed a gun at him.

"You can kill me, but you can’t kill my soul," said El Diablo calmly.

“Whatever!”

CLICK

BOOM!

El Diablo was dead.

“Yes, yes, he’s gone FOREVER!”

Just then, Abby walked in and saw El Diablo dead.

She told his parents. His parents told the police. The police put Mitch in Juvenile Hall.

“At least he is with God now,” said El Diablo’s mom.

Surprisingly everyone from his school came to his memorial service!

From that day on El Diablo would be known as “Nathanial the Great”.

Although he died, he died with honor because he saved several lives.

Abby now works at a school.  She teaches Kindergarteners, and every year when she gets a new class she tells Nathanial’s story.

And as for the wolf…. well, he is still improving childrens' behavior.

And telling Nathanial’s story of course!....

Ok, ok! I’ll tell you! Nathanial  is still alive!

But his location is unknown.

If he is ever found I’ll let you know!

This is the end of book one out of three!

“Greater love has no one than this, that he lay his life down for his friend.” John 15:13 (NIV)

   

 

 

 


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Saturday 5 April 2008 - Untitled Comment

Thought shared by...Storyman


That was a sweet story. I am glad the story ended happily.


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Friday 18 April 2008 - Untitled Comment

Thought shared by...Anonymous


cool story but the ending cold of used less drama
It made my heart jump the rest was good


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