BAM! " I got him!'said justan.
WOOSH! "luke?"
"What are you doing here?"
"i'm helping you out!".
"Han's out there too and he's covering us from here".
"I'm going down!"said kevan.
"Increase speed full throddell!"
As they reached the planet's surface, they saw hundreds of Tie Fighters.
"Han! we need your help!'
They saw trees like on Endor, roads like on a peaceful planet, houses, buildings, and huge oceans that would cover a whole moon.then they realized that they were fighting Earth.
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Feb. 2, 2009 - Untitled Comment
Oh, you forgot to write "Chapter 3" before you wrote "The Fight." That way you won't get mixed up with what chapter you are. It is easy to fix. Go to your account, click "settings" then click "entries" then find the entry that says "The Fight" and click on "edit". then fix it and click "save" and you are done.
If you want me to do it, just say so and I will.