Poetic Tragedy
Dateline: 7.11.2006
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You cannot see through blinded eyes

through smoke until it clears

The water never looks that deep

until you're half way in

Love is blind and never fades

but broken hearts last longer

Time cannot heal every wound

And hate is always stronger

Promises are rarely kept

when truth's not worth the cost

Somethings are better left unsaid

Some memories better lost

 

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7.16.2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by DeepBlueSkittle

i love this poem. it's really really good. seriously. :)

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9.16.2007 - I think these titles are very silly and waste time.. it took me five minutes just to think of one.

Posted by MikkitheGsusfreak

are all your poems so sad?? you sound like you live a really sad life, is your life really that sad?? You write really good poetry, and you should definately consider publishing.. but just reading it made me feel gloomy. Its awesome poetry, and it sounds like its coming from your heart, but its hard to tell if its just for looks. Sometimes it is.. sometimes its not. I write poetry too, although it isn't as good as yours, but alot more cheerfull. But, if sad poems work for you, you should write sad poems I guess.

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5.24.2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Fanatic

Wow, thats awesome. And very true.

~Verge

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