Poetic Tragedy
Dateline: 7.19.2007
For those I loved:

Why have you all gone away?
You left me standing in the rain
Softly whispering, "stay"
I loved you, but now it's changed
I'm not screaming, not bleeding, not begging
But I'm not pretending that I'm okay
'Cause I've learned that everyone feels this way
I'm just the only one who feels like me
And it's okay if I need you to save me
But I also know that you won't
I remember us, everything
I miss laughing
I miss having someone to talk to
I miss the way it was
I feel abandoned, but I pushed you away
You left, but I never gave you a reason to stay
And so this is where we are
I'm not screaming anymore

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7.29.2007 - hi!

Posted by Sarah95

hi there! that was AWSOME! i like writing poetry and stuff like that 2! u rock! i know u don't know me, but wanna be friends? check out my blog: Sarah95! hope 2 hear from u soon!
Sarah

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8.14.2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by roaringkitten

i just broke up with my bf and what you said really spoke to me i loved it thanks kitten

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8.24.2007 - Hey

Posted by antelopehead

Hey nice poem.

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10.25.2007 - your poetry

Posted by luv2homeschool4him

is pretty sad. whY?

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