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The Grammar Of Poetry

 

Legolas and I have recently taken the position of Poetry Moderators for Poet's Treehouse over at the HSB Backyard.   The rules will soon be posted up at the Backyard and you can learn the details about submitting your poetry to us there.   In honor of this event, I have decided to post a little "tutorial" on how to write poetry.  Hopefully this will be helpful to some of you!

 

Poetry, like every other kind of art, has a form.  It has rules and reasons and a particular routine. Today, many people are forgetting this.  They think poetry is just some genius quality that a few people have and the rest of us must live without.  It is true that some people are naturally gifted at writing poetry but all of us can be good at it if we really want to. 

 

I am reading a book this year called “The Grammar Of Poetry” written by Matt Whitling.  It speaks of the different forms of poetry and covers the basic rules that apply to all poetry.  Knowing these rules has really helped me to write better poetry and even to enjoy other people’s poetry better.  The book actually goes into quite a bit of detail but the points that have been the most helpful to me are these:

 

For different types of poetry, different orders of stresses are used.  In poetry scanning (going over a poetical work to determine what meter and rhyme scheme was used) each accented syllable is marked with a stress symbol, a little slash above the accented syllable.  An unaccented syllable is marked with a breve, a mark shaped like an upside-down half moon and placed above the unaccented syllable.  The three forms of poetry that I have read about so far are iambic, trochaic and anapestic.                               

 

In iambic poetry, the second syllable is accented but not the first.  An example of a piece of iambic poetry is Tennyson’s “The Eagle,” which begins like this: (I have put the accented syllables in bold type so that you can see where the stresses are)

 

“He clasps the crag with crooked hands

Close to the sun in lonely lands…

 

Trochaic meter is the exact opposite of iambic meter- in trochaic meter the stress is on the first syllable, and the second syllable is unaccented.  An example of trochaic poetry is this line from Chesterton’s dedication in the Ballad Of The White Horse.

 

 “…Carrying the firelight on your face,

Beyond the loneliest star.”

 

Anapestic meter is formed with two unaccented syllables and then one accented one.  An example of anapestic poetry is Lord Byron’s  “The Destruction Of Sennacharib” which begins like this:

 

“The Assyrian came down like a wolf on the fold

And his cohorts were gleaming in purple and gold…”

 

Dactylic meter is the exact opposite of Anapestic meter.  It is a combination of of three syllables- the first is accented and the second and third are not.  An example of dactylic poetry is this

 

Hail to the chief who in triumph advances,

Honored and blest be the evergreen pine!

 

The best way to write good poetry, though, is not to memorize a bunch a grammar rules but to READ poetry.  Although learning about poetical grammar and forms is helpful, the most important thing is to read the works of other poets.  This is crucial for providing the vision and inspiration necessary for writing good poetry.  (Some of my personal favorites are Alfred Lord Tennyson, Emily Dickinson, and Gilbert Keith Chesterton.)  When you read a poet, concentrate on their style and what subjects they generally focus on.  Try to get a feel for what the poet is like- their worldview and life.  A good way to write poetry is to first read a poem written by another poet and then, with the meter still in your mind, to try and write your own poem about a different subject but using the same meter.  Maybe you could try to identify the meter too.

 

However you decide to study poetry, remember that it is meant to be enjoyed!

-Frodo

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Monday - Thanks for the comment! =)

Posted by opckid
I don't believe that I've read Pursuit of God... maybe I'll have time this summer. (This week is incredibly busy as it's our last!) But I do recommend Desiring God by John Piper.

And I had to laugh about your post... I began reading it and thought, hmm, that sounds a lot like the poetry book we used a few years ago... by Matt Whitling! ^_^

In Him,
Narie
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Tuesday - Poetry

Posted by HRTF
I like to write poetry too (that is, I like to rhyme sentances and then use those sentances to make poetry). I think I'll submit my poem "ERASMUS OF ROTTERDAM" into the Poet's Treehouse thing for you. Maybe I'll enter more later; who knows? Anyway, I liked your post.

Until we meet again,
HRTF

P.S. I just finished (today) reading the poem "THE SONG OF ROLAND" and liked it a lot! Adventure, comedy, love, everything a good story/poem needs. I recomend it heartily! -HRTF
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Tuesday - hi

Posted by sleeper
hi!!! I'm back
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Tuesday - cooooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted by sleeper
cool post
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Wednesday - Thank you for the post!

Posted by Backyard
Hi!
The Backyard is for ages 6 to 17 so we changed your post in the area where it stated the ages.

Your post was really great, hopefully you will get a lot of reader participation.

Thank you,
Bluejane, and Eyebright
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Wednesday - Hello

Posted by POTCgirl
I just thought I would come by and say hello. Hello!
I like the changes you have made to your blog. I have not been by in a while so I am not sure if they are new or not.

Bye,
Serena
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Wednesday - Poetry and meter

Posted by totustuus
How interesting! I normally tend to write in dactylic meter. I normally don't think about what form I want to write in before I start a poem ;-), but it'll sort of come out in my first two stanzas.

It's amazing how many forms of poetry there are!! I often like the ones that are consistent in meter until the last stanza or the last line. There are a couple forms, sonnets being one of them.

And Alfred Lord Tennyson and G. K. Chesterton are both among my favorite poets as well. :-)

No galu govad gen,
Aldawen
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Wednesday - Hey

Posted by POTCgirl
I hate to say this just because you said "or else" but Jack is my favorite. sorry!


POTCgirl
Serena
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Thursday - I saw...

Posted by Jocelyndixon
You were doing that!

Interesting post... I wil read over it more!

Jocelyn
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Friday - :)

Posted by CarpeBanana
We did the Whitling book, too. It's a winner. (OPCkid's mom here)

And here is what Ogden Nash had to say about the Assyrian thing:


VERY LIKE A WHALE


One thing that literature would be greatly the better for
Would be a more restricted employment by the authors of simile and metaphor.
Authors of all races, be they Greeks, Romans, Teutons or Celts,
Can't seem just to say that anything is the thing it is but have to go out of their way to say that it is like something else.

What does it mean when we are told
That that Assyrian came down like a wolf on the fold?
In the first place, George Gordon Byron had enough experience
To know that it probably wasn't just one Assyrian, it was a lot of Assyrians.
However, as too many arguments are apt to induce apoplexy and thus hinder longevity.
We'll let it pass as one Assyrian for the sake of brevity.

Now then, this particular Assyrian, the one who's cohorts were gleaming in purple and gold,
Just what does the poet mean when he says he came down like a wold on the fold?
In heaven and earth more than is dreamed of in our philosophy there are great many things.
But I don't imagine that among them there is a wolf with purple and gold cohorts or purple and gold anythings.

No, no, Lord Byron, before I'll believe that this Assyrian was actually like a wolf I must have some kind of proof;
Did he run on all fours and did he have a hairy tail and a big red mouth and big white teeth and did he say Woof woof?

Frankly I think it is very unlikely, and all you were entitled to say, at the very most,
Was that the Assyrian cohorts came down like a lot of Assyrian cohorts about to destroy the Hebrew host.
But that wasn't fancy enough for Lord Byron, oh dear me no, he had to invent a lot of figures of speech and then interpolate them,
With the result that whenever you mention Old Testament soldiers to people they say Oh yes, they're the ones that a lot of wolves dressed up in gold and purple ate them.

That's the kind of thing that's being done all the time by poets, from Homer to Tennyson;
They're always comparing ladies to lilies and veal to venison,
And they always say things like that the snow is a white blanket after a winter storm.
Oh it is, is it, all right then, you sleep under a six-inch blanket of snow and I'll sleep under a half-inch blanket of unpoetical blanket material and we'll see which one keeps warm,
And after that maybe you'll begin to comprehend dimly
What I mean by too much metaphor and simile.





Edited by CarpeBanana on May. 17, 2007 at 8:30 PM
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Sunday - Huh!?!?

Posted by Curufinwe
Your LOTR movie on your sidebar doesn't work!
And Why exatly did you comment me with a dot? (I read the title, but you should put that in the comment, not as the title.)
What do you guys think my blog title should be?


your friend,
~Curufinwe
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Sunday - <i>Untitled Comment</i>

Posted by TheLordsDaughter
That was a great post! You are absolutely correct, reading good poetry is the best way to learn to write it. I love writing poetry myself. I have written many poems. Unfortunately I have not figured out what meter I write in.

You two are really good at poetry.

Come and see me soon!

Your Sister in Christ,
Rebekah ~ The Lord's Daughter

Edited by TheLordsDaughter on May. 19, 2007 at 3:01 PM
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Wednesday - Hey

Posted by Ekulboy
Yeah well its a pretty awsome little button are you sure you don'twant to push it..
Well I was a sucker and pushed it...
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Posted by Anonymous
I am so sorry Frodo for not replying to your email!

Please LMK if you're mad at me... I feel terrible!

Love you
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Tuesday - Hello

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I am so sorry Frodo for not replying to your email!

Please LMK if you're mad at me... I feel terrible!

Love you
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Wednesday - HSB Backyard

Posted by HRTF
Frodo & Legolas-
I just wanted to let you know that the link to the HSB Backyard doesn't work. How do you get there without it?

Until we meet again,
HRTF
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