Ok, I have been invited to enter in a song writing contest, I don't know how great I'll do, since I just started writing songs not that long ago. (usualy I just write poetry). Sooooo.... Here goes:

                                                             AWAKE

Staring at the wall,

Wondering why I bother

Getting out of bed.

Whats the purpose,

Yeah, whats the- use.

Asking myself a dozen questions,

That I don't have an answer for.

Maybe I'm just going insane.

Bridge:

Living for myself, yeah,

Living for today,

I'm not living at all,

A walking zombie,

Walking dead.

Somebody pinch me,

'Cuz I don't think I'm quite,

Awake.

Can't seem to shake myself

Of this comatose I'm in,

I try to scream and

Nothing happens.

I think that I'm sleepwalking, yeah,

Where's my alarm clock when I need it?

Then again, Maybe I'm just going

Insane.

Living for myself

Yeah, living for today.

I'm not living at all,

A walking zombie,

Walking dead.

Somebody pinch me,

'Cuz I don't think I'm quite

Awake.

I need someone to shake me out,

Of this reverie I'm stuck inside.

My eyes are blank,

 Can't think a thought

To save my life.

Yeah, I'm trapped inside an empty room,

And all I can thnk about is- me.

But maybe I'm just going insane.

Living for myself,

Yeah, living for today.

I'm not living at all,

A walking zombie,

Walking dead.

Somebody pinch me,

'cuz I don't think I'm quite

Awake.

Can't seem to escape from myself,

Yeah, I think I need Your help,

Only You can pull me out

Of this pit I'm in, yeah.

It's so dark,

I need your light,

Don't leave me,

Don't leave me, yeah.

I wanna live for you,

Yeah, living for eternity,

I finaly feel alive.

I'm walking full of life.

Don't bother pinching me,

'Cuz I'm already

Awake.

That's all I've got, I just wrote it one day when I was feeling frustrated with myself and my own humanity. I hope you judges like it!

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Posted by Monkeyboy

ok pro's con's

pro's: good message and i like the change in thought at the end.

con's: some points of the song didn't flow but you got to remeber i'm judging by what u wrote not the music with it

ok well other then that it was song put together very well thank you for that song. u have a great gift!

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Posted by ForeverConfused

i loved it! i can imagine how it's sung too. I think Monkeyboy's making me do it. But i'm terrible at writing lyrics. >.<

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Posted by Anonymous

Hey, it's your cuz =D Pretty good song, i think it would be better with music becuase it didn't all quite flow a couple times.But other than that, you are AWESOME!!! =D wuv u,
~l~ME~l~

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Posted by emeeroxs123

hi I am Emeeroxs123

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Posted by Hannah13

Cool!
I like your blog wanna be friends?

Hannah

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