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Apr. 28, 2008
The Black Valley (Chapter 1) By Leslie (TNT)

            The Black Valley

                     Chapter 1

Nicole laid down on the soft, green grass as she gazed upon the blue sky. I wonder why everything is so quiet. Nicole thought. She didn't mind it though, she rarely ever got a moment of silence. Suddenley, she hears hooves approaching her. She stood up, and gazed upon a horse rider, wearing all black. It was a black robe that covered every inch of him, including his face. Nicole's heart raced as he got closer and closer. He raised out a sword, she shut her eyes in fear, yearning to run, but to frightened! Suddenly, she felt a strong hand picking her up, and gentley placing her on the horse, she opened her eyes, it was her brother, John.

"Oh, I'm so glad it's you! I was terribley afraid!" she said, wrapping her arms around him. "Yeah, but  if I weren't here, you would have been killed, Nicole! You need to learn to run, no matter what, okay?" he said. Nicole looked down for a moment, and then thought about what he said. "You don't suppose the rider shall return, do you?" she asked. "We are leaving now, we must not stop until we are out of the town," he said sadly,"but we're going to try to meet up with mom and dad." he said.

A silent tear slid down Nicole's cheak. She then bowed her head. Dear Lord, I'm scared, I don't know what will happen, and.... I am going to try and let you deal with it, without another though. Amen.

Nicole had fallen asleep before they reached The Bridge of Other Worlds. No one knew where it led, no one knew what it was, and after a few years, they had even forgotten it existed.

"Nicole, wake up!" John said. "I think we've found something!" Nicole opened her eyes, and stared at the beauty of the bridge. But it wasn't really like a bridge at all! In fact, it looked nothing like one. It was grey, and round, and it apeared as if it had stairs from the outside.

"Let's take a look in there!" Nicole said. "I don't know, it might be dangerous." John said. "Please...." she said giving him her sad eyes. "Alright, but at the first sight of trouble, we're gone!" he said.

 


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Apr. 30, 2008 - hi

Posted by makala

hi I really liked that store. I am 13 and my name is Makala would you like to be freinds.

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May. 25, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Poetess

Nice Lez. And Em, Hey! How's story writing? I am working on another one, having finishes my other, and it's called (the one I am working on) 'Samuel Myers." It is massively long, and not near done. I am prooud of my progress. :) but it's God who gives me the words to write. I am just his tool.

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Jul. 16, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Poetess

Come on gals!!! Keep this blog alive!!!!!

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Oct. 3, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by lifeisajourney

I can't really read your story because of the font color.

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Oct. 16, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Poetess

C'mon girls! You can do it! Fill this blog with words!
How's writing, by the way? Mine is great. I just wrote a short story in 15 minutes today. And I have started a new novel, having finished Samuel Myers. So far my newest has 12,000 words in it. :) My excited. I also have a story called The Stranger. I always thought it wasn't very good, till I just recently re-read it. It's not bad! Anyway, have a good night!

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