Poetic Tragedy

Sep. 18, 2006

Finally!

And finally a story. Its short. Really crappy. I havent been posting cuz I'm afraid that every1 will think my stories are bad and it'll all be bad. So, I'm posting this stupid story that I jotted down in like 5 mins. And, administrator, if its not apropriate tell me and I'll remove it. Thanx!

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(By Krystal D)

 

He came home with tears streaming down his face. It seemed likehis whole world came crashing down on him. He had gotten into a fight with his girlfriend. It ended up with his heart broken. He couldnt take the pain. He loved her more then anybody could ever know. She was his world. Now it seemed as if he had lost everything. It was to much for him to handle. He grabbed a piece of paper and jotted down a note. He stuck the gun in his mouth and pulled the trigger. Later his girlfriend came over to apologize. She felt as if she was nothing without him. But she was shocked to see his dead body on the groud. Tears came out her eyes as she read the note that said "Do you care now?"

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Yeah, I know. Way 2 short, way 2 crappy, way 2 depressing. It was something I wrote down within 5 minutes. Sorry! Maybe, I'll actually post something good on here next time. Luv ya'll!

 

~*StoryWriter*~

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Sep. 19, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Songwriter
wow. ...the sad thing is that this stuff actually DOES happen. All people need is Jesus. If we'd realize that, maybe there wouldn't be so many suicides. Hey, glad you're back!

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Sep. 19, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Ninjirate
I like the story! It was sad but it was awesome! You should post more. I liked it! I love the pic u have up their! I think Davey Havok is the sexiest man alive! Leaving Song Pt. 2 is awesome also! Complete awesomeness!

<3 Ninjirate
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Sep. 20, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by ljcool
It wasn't bad! I was a little depressed but HEY...I write depressing too.
until later
cya, lauren
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Sep. 21, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Ninjirate
I wish more ppl knew about that song. Its awesome. Do u run into a lot of posers? U know like ppl who are say they like AFI but have only ever heard of "Miss Murder" and "Prelude 12/21"? I hate ppl like that! They annoy me! I cant believe that u own every AFI album! Thats far out man! I wish I did! I only own Decemberunderground but I know a ton of the old stuff. They're old stuff is awesome!

<3 Ninjirate
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Sep. 22, 2006 - <i>Untitled Comment</i>

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Yes, it is a cool song isn't it? I am writing a stroy. It is about monsters that live in the vents and drainpipes.
I feel sorry for the girl in that story.

Edited by BlackRose on Sep. 22, 2006 at 8:42 AM
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Sep. 22, 2006 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Songwriter
I haven't seen the movie yet. But I did hear the rumor he was hott. And I think someone had a picture of him up on their blog, and if that was him, I agree, he is hott.

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