Poetic Tragedy

Feb. 22, 2007

Insane

Thank you so much 4 the good feed back on my song! I appreciate it. I havent posted in a while and I'm sorry about that. So, I just realized, a lot of ppl are posting pics. I wanna post sum pics of myself! I should take sum sumtime. yeah. that would be fun. Ok, well heres another song I wrote called "Insane". This song, I wrote becuz I was bored and the chorus came 2 my head and a random time and I thought 2 myself "Wow! I like this!" so I grabbed my notebook and thought up stuff 2 go with it and hence forth this song exsited in my room till now cuz now it exsits on the internet! Yeah, that was lame. Well, here is!

 

 

 

Burning away from hopeless memories.
I was foolish.
So immature.
I believed your lies.
All those times we said "I love you"
Take my heart and rip it apart.

(chorus)
I'm going insane.
Cut out all the lies.
The scream that terrifies.
I'm going insane.
Living life without you by my side.
Insane.

Locked up in this bitter place.
Its cold and I feel so alone.
Thoughts of you are tearing me to shreds.
When will this nightmare end?
I'll take this knife.
My heart will bleed for you.

(chorus)

Take my heart and rip it apart.
My last dying screams.
(repeat 4 times)

Save me from the pain of going insane.

(chorus 3 times)

so yeah! what do ya think?

~*Krystal*~

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Feb. 22, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Songwriter
yeah, simon got nicer and randy got meaner? what's up with the dawg??? haha. OH YEAH! I definitely think you should post some pictures of you!
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Feb. 22, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by BlackRose
It was a pretty good song. I llike to write songs but I could never go pro, because I don't understand all the stuff about "bridges" and "choruses" and "The specific ways lines have to be phrased" and I'd also have to write music to go with it, and I wouldn't know the first thing about that lol. Oh-well maybe I'll learn all that in college.
Yah, I know exactly what you mean. I hate readin books by Christian authors, where some gangster gets shot in the foot and he says "Rats!" or "Stink!" Its so unrealistic.
SO, have you seen the movie "The illusionist" I have, its REALLY good and I think you'd like it.
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Feb. 22, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by soccergal
Oh. I liked that. Did your friend draw that picture too? that was pretty cool taking 6th in a national contest. But that song was really good.
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Mar. 1, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by Ninjirate
thanx! Plamer is president! What the heck?! i wanna ask how he became president but I dont want u 2 tell me and ah! do u watch CSI?????

this song is kool! I like it! The pic is pretty!

xoxo

<3 Zee
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Mar. 11, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by BrokenRose
I love it! You are so freakin' good!!!!!!!!!!! I'm hungry. I want cheesecake, Yuuuuuuuuuummmmmmmmmm!!!!!!
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Apr. 24, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by BlackRose
Hey girl! When are you going to post another story? (or song)? I always come here to see updates but I never do...lol, ITs okay. IT probubly takes you awhile to write stories, just like it does me. It can take me a YEAR just to write a short story lol, probubly just because I'm lazy tho.
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Jul. 13, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by BlackRose
ummm, I dunno if you still use this blog or not...but You have been awarded "The most Rockin Girl Blogger" award, by..me. I was awarded and now I have to award 5 ppl. U R 1 of the five ppl I picked. Now you must go to my blog to get your icon, and youre supposed to pass the award on to 5 ppl but u dnt have 2.
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May. 19, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by DarkHeart
I like that song!
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