In the Beginning...Genesis 1:1

Aug. 14, 2008

Super-Otis (PART THREE)

When Super-Otis turned the corner he saw two evil looking guys. The first guy wore an old inside out scarecrow shirt, baggy trousers, a big belt, tattoos, and a straw necklace. The second guy wore a lab coat, yellow pants, blue tie, white shirt and tattoos.

Super-Otis didn't have to ask who they were. The second guy was Bailen, and the first guy was the ... Complainer.

After a moment of silence, Complainer asked: ''WHO ARE YOU?''

''I'm Super-Otis.''

As soon as Super-Otis said that, Complainer ripped out his lightsaber. In response, Super-Otis pulled out his lightsaber.

Bailen, who had been watching, fled in fear. The Complainer whipped his lightsaber over Super-Otis' head. Super-Otis put up his weapon to stop him. They locked lightsabers. The Complainer ripped his lightsaber away. Super-Otis dodged another attack and spun around, pushing the villian away.

Super-Otis, pushing Complainer away, suddenly turned around, putting him in his spot.

The Complainer suddenly pulled his lightsaber away and said ''Adios!'' Turning around, he rushed across the street toward a board in the sidewalk. Sliding it out of the way he climbed down in to the hole. The board slid back into place.

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Aug. 18, 2008 - Untitled Comment

Posted by friends4tea
I love all the deep descriptions you use for your story! It really makes your characters come to life. Very exciting! :)
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