Jun. 27, 2009 - Evernoor prologue, rough draft.
'Ello again... *sneezes and looks around the empty attic*... where di' ever'one go? Hm. Well. 'Ere is th' prologue to my book "Evernoor." Note tha' Jack's character "Striker" an' MY character "Striker" are two different guys. Thankee verra much.
Well, wi'out further ado:
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It was a blood red moon that cast its eerie light upon the three figures that were slowly making their way up the mountainside. The figure leading the group was a young girl, who had seen about fourteen winters, behind her was an older man and a man that was wearing a cloak with the hood pulled up, concealing his face. Suddenly the girl stopped in front of a group of rocks, which was, supposedly, the result of a landslide. “This is it.” Was all she said. The hooded man spoke, “Aye, this is it; this is the entrance to the hidden caves of the Gifted People. Well done, Lilith.” He glanced up at the broad mountainside. “Deep within this mountain is a series of cave and tunnels, and none Evil may enter here. It will be a Good place to wait until the Children of Promise come; for my Followers and I will be persecuted and hunted down until Peace once again comes to this lost land. The Evil One, Mordas, is determined to destroy us all.” He turned and looked to the East as a Gryphon glided over on giant wings. “Indeed, even now he attacks the castle in search of the children. And here comes the Gryphon Chaim to take you to do your next duty, Lilith.”
Chaim landed and nodded his head at the hooded man, a reverent look in his eyes. “My Lord Adonai, it is Good to see you here.” Adonai nodded back, but did not remove the hood. “It is Good to see you too, Chaim. However, do not go spreading it around that I am here, my presence must remain a secret for the time being.” “Very well, my Adonai.” The Gryphon turned to the young girl, Lilith. ”Come now, young Wizardess, we must hurry! Adriel has advanced upon the castle, our time grows short.” Chaim’s voice was urgent. Lilith clambered onto Chaim’s back; and with a great whooshing of wings he took off, heading back East.
Adonai and the other man stood, watching, until Chaim and his passenger were out of sight. Then Adonai broke the silence. “She will face many hardships, Elisha, and only time will tell if she will make it through them.” Elisha asked “Who, Lilith or Elsa?” Adonai paused for a moment before gravely replying, “Both.”
Lilith smiled as she and Chaim flew over Evernoor to the castle. She loved flying, feeling the wind blow against her face, and the exhilarating feeling that she got as Chaim dipped and soared ever so gracefully until they reached the castle. Looking down, a frown replaced the smile on Lilith’s face as she observed the destruction below. “Mordas and his men do their work well.” She sighed. “Indeed, they do; and now we must do our work well or all hope is lost.” Chaim said as he swooped to the side, heading towards a tower that spiraled upwards. “Are you ready, Lilith?” Lilith gritted her teeth and said “On the count of three I’ll jump.” She forced her eyes to stay open as Chaim drew closer to the top of the tower. One false move and it was a long fall to the ground below, which was swarming with enemy soldiers. Lilith couldn’t afford to mess up. Suddenly she felt Adonai’s presence and Lilith knew she would make it. “One, two... three!” And Lilith jumped from Chaim’s back onto the top of the tower. Lilith breathed a sigh of relief as her bare feet hit the cold stones. She jerked open a trap door on the floor, and silently yet swiftly raced down a set of stairs until she reached a doorway. Lilith entered without knocking and looked around; her sharp brown eyes pierced the dimly light room. There, in the corner, lay a small sleeping child, her curly locks as black as a raven’s feather; her long eyelashes standing out against her pale face. Lilith gently scooped the girl up in her arms and started to carry her out into the hallway, but as she peered down the hallway, she saw three tall figures, cloaked in black, heading towards her. A cold feeling of fear washed over her like an ocean wave. Darkriders. They were corrupt beings, Men turned Evil, and they were too Powerful for Lilith to Fight alone. But they had her, and the child, cut off. There was no way to get to Chaim. Lilith panicked, but only momentarily. The child stirred and wrapped her arms around Lilith’s neck, resting her head on Lilith’s shoulder. Lilith looked down at her and smiled. She would not fail this child. Lilith hurried over to a window and whistle. It was a haunting sort of call, and the Darkriders were unable to hear it.
Up on the tower, Chaim heard the call, and flew over to the window. “I’ve been cut off. They know I, and the child, are in here, and the Darkriders are about to come in to take her. Hurry, now, take her." Lilith gently placed the girl on Chaim's broad back, then, just as the first Darkrider unsheathed his sword with a chilling metallic ring and started quickly advancing toward them, Lilith leaped onto Chaim, and they flew off before the Riders could do anything.
The first Darkrider uttered a curse as he watched them fly off. Pulling back his hood, his brown/green eyes blazed as he snarled to himself. “Mordas will not be pleased.” Whirling around, Striker yelled at the other two, “You idiots, instead of just standing there, go kill the others! And, I shall tell the Master about this. For, not only has Elsa escaped from us, but... “ His breathing got heavier and he started rasping slightly as two more Darkriders appeared, empty handed. “Don’t tell me you let that boy get away!” Getting only silence from the two Darkriders, Striker banged his fist on a nearby table and ordered “Get out of my sight! Go, kill anyone else you can find, do anything you can that might please Mordas. For surely he will be furious to learn that we failed. Now, GO!”
As the four Riders left the room, Striker turned to the window, his glittering eyes full of hatred.
“I will have my revenge, Arianna, this I promise. I will take your children, and I will not rest until they are dead.”
Striker found himself unconsciously repeating the same words his master, Mordas, had uttered earlier as he stared at the red moon.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~I hope y'all like it. Now, someone else POST!
btw, when are we getting a Cbox? Wasn't Pip going t' post tha'? (no pressure, Pippin, jes' wonderin'.)
May God always guide your pen,
Laura Comfort Wylde
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Jun. 18, 2009 - Jack Baillot's Ghost and his sardines was here
Is no one writing this summer? Come on, I mean we have a WHOLE three months of FREEDOM!!! We should spend most of it writing :D ANYONE? I can hear my voice echoing in here it is so empty.
Anyhow, here is my controbution to the Attack-does RK through us in the dungeon for cliff hangers?
Striker studied the cloud, it was not moving, just hanging in the sky; and it was all alone, all around it the sky was blue. “How could it have just appeared like that?” he asked no one in particular.
Callan shook his head. “Well, it can't do us any harm since it is in the sky, we should keep walking.”
They followed this plan, but the cloud had sobered them a great deal. All that day they could think about nothing else but that huge black cloud, and as they walked it seemed to follow them. It might not have been too bad had it, in blocking out the sun, lessened the heat; but if anything it only made things worse. Now the air was heavy and it was hard to breath, stuffy.
“We need to stop,” Trystan was the one who first said it. The others were more then ready to agree by then, and they sank down to the sand; without a word they all opened their water flasks and took drinks.
“We have to get out from under that cloud,” Striker looked up at it again; it seemed to him as if it was lowering in the sky, he rubbed his eyes.
“And how are we going to do that?” Ben-Argon asked, he fought back a yawn. It struck him how tried he was, he wondered what was causing it. “I think I could sleep for a whole week,” he said over a yawn.
Trystan stared at him. “Are you feeling well Ben-Argon?” he asked quickly.
“Yes,” Ben-Argon nodded his head, annoyance in his voice, “you don't have to worry about me all the time, I am not fail just because I am blind!”
Callan leaped to his feet suddenly. “What is that?” he demanded, he stepped on something.
“What?” Striker looked up at him.
Callan pulled his foot up and everyone but Ben-Argon looked down. Trystan's face went as white as a sheet and he leaped to his feet; Callan saw the look of horror on his face and jumped up as well. Striker took a step backwards and Ben-Argon stood as well, though he had no clue as to what was going on.
“What is it?” he asked.
“One of the Scorpions!” Trystan said in a tight voice.
Ben-Argon took a step backwards, his face went as white as Trystan's.
Striker knelt down by the dead bug while Trystan looked at the cloud again. “What is so bad about one scorpion?” he asked, he had heard about them of course, but this one was dead now; no harm there.
“We have to get out of here,” Trystan suddenly said.
Striker looked up. “Why?” he asked, “what is going on here?”
Ben-Argon fixed his blind eyes on Striker. “Scorpions do not travel alone,” he said, “they travel in packs, and they fly. That is no cloud, it is a swarm of scorpions, very deadly scorpions!”
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Jun. 10, 2009 - Hmph.
I find it highly interesting that we get several posts into what could be a nice loverly blog *coughs and says something about horror and danger, and looks nervously out the black windows* and then we STOP. What happened? I would be in deep distress to hear that my friends had all been bound and gagged in the night, and then carried away by a Villain in a dark cloak to a castle made of black stone, and there forced to eat sardines for the rest of their miserable lives.
Upon finding yourself in need of someone to blame for the idea of this blog, I am not going to say anything. *perches on the back of the couch and glares darkly* Yes, dear Reader, it is I, Pippin Armour, who sequentially gets thrown into emotions which in turn toss me into wild fury or blissful luve regarding her writing. I write mainly fantasy/allegory but have tried my hand at contemporary and several other goodies. I also am hastily becoming infamous for forcing people at silver daggerpoint to co-author with me, until it seems as though poor Pip cannot write a book without a second person to torment. But on the offset, I have actually completed two novels; Heveria, which I am NOT rewriting no matter what anybody tells me [it's sentimental, I tell you!] and Shaddai, an allegory about the birth of Christ which I wrote this past December for Advent.
Besides these and my several insane co-As, I am working on a nonsense book with my two younger sisters called Popchanka, link to that's at the Hideaway. My thriller/alternate universe/modernistic attempt more or less flopped dreadfully. M'aine is in hiatus, perhaps for ever. *wrings out the Infamous Hankie* I am working on a crack novel about the NaNo Peoples called Sundapple; I have another fantasy called Roh with a stupid Renegade named Jareth; and aside from tons and TONS of random doodads and failed novel attempts, my main work as of now is Realm. Currently I luve Realm but this is obviously subject to change.
I am probably most known for my torture scenes; "beautiful gore" would be one way of describing now I work. Muahaha. Mainly because my Evil SAE is overly fond of typing over my shoulder. I picture writing as sort of a battle; you have Good and you have Evil, and you have to fight it out through your pen. That's why I even let R.K. get near my writing. I imagine he'll be posting something before too long; I've made him promise to be a bit more tame than he is other places but he's morbidly ecstatic to have a Dungeon once more. Please, I beg of you, don't blow him off or insult his curly hair! I don't like it when my friends get thrown into utter blackness! You thought the Inklings dungeon was bad...*shudders*
So, thus I make my grand entrance. *sweeps black cloak away from her and bows* Be warned; I have slushies and I know how to dump them.
May the hand of God guide your pen,
Pip/Pippers/Pippin Armour
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May. 28, 2009 - 'Ello Peoples!
Greetings one and all! Laura Wilder here.
I am SO 'appy tha' I could join! This looks so awesome! I thought tha' since I dinna 'ave any stories t' post (yet),I'd give y'all an update on where I stand in me writing adventures.
Evernoor: Is goin' along slowly but steadily. It has gone through a couple av changes plot-wise, an' I changed a couple av characters, an' took a couple out, but otherwise is goin' along jes' fine.
Chipper The Squirrel: Is doin' VERRA well! I 'ave been quite inspired for this lil' guy lately, much to 'is delight. I have decided to write a lot av short stories about 'im, and then make 'em into one big book. Sofar I 'ave been inspired for about three short stories, and one is almost done. I am verra pleased with this progress.
The Time Travelers: is DEAD. Kapwing. Kapoosh. GONE. I am NOT EVER goin' t' write those books. They 'ave ceased t' be.
Danceaway: I am pleased with this one, too. 'Tis goin' along verra well. Not as slow as Evernoor, but not as fast as Chipper, jes' ploddin' along.
Runaway: Eh, I 'ave stopped working on this for now, but I shall pick it up again later. 'Tis the first book in the "Away" series, an' Dance is th' second. I dinna iffin I shall write an'more Away books, we shall see.
The co-A: Ah,this is a book wi'out a title. Pip an' I are co-Authoring a book,and for now we refer t' it as "The co-A". I'm not sure if Pip wants t' reveal any av it yet, so tha' is all I'm tellin' ever'one 'bout it.
On top av all tha', starting June first I will be doin' a personal NaNo. My goal: to write 30K during the month av June. This frightens me characters quite a bit, I think they needa get. over. it.
So,because av th' NaNo,you will either be 'ardly seein' me 'tall, or I will be postin' like crazy on 'ere, we shall see.
Oh, and if you go HERE , you can see me writin' blog.
Well, I shall now depart, and I hope t' post again soon.
May God always guide your pen,
Laura Comfort Wilder.
Oh,an' do I need t' post things so tha' only member can see 'em, or ever'one?
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May. 26, 2009 - The dog fight
Anyhow, now I post my story. This is the dog fight from Misadventure on the Mountain. Its long, if it is too long let me know and I will post it in parts.
Jessie flew back to the town where everything was in mayhem. The Red Baron was now shooting at the houses, and the people had fled to the street to find another safe hiding place. Fear spurred Jessie on; she had to stop that man before someone was hurt, or killed!
The Red Baron was unaware she was there until she flew up beside him; then passed him. He was almost struck immovable when he saw the other plane, but he soon recovered and flew after it. He recognized the plane, but he also knew neither Aaron nor Rick knew how to fly.
Jessie led the Red Baron away from the town; at first he was too stunned to do anything other then follow her, however, that soon changed. They were flying low over the trees when he opened fire on her.
Ra-tat-tat! Jessie rocked the plane from side to side, trying to avoid the bullets that threatened to rip the wings apart. Rat-tat-tat-tat. The Red Baron managed to stay on Jessie’s tail, following her every move, and proving himself to be an expert flier.
Bullets flew past the biplane, some were striking dangerously close; Jessie knew she could not keep the Red Baron off for long unless she did something, and fast; she decided to try one of Nate's tricks, never for a moment stopping to think that it might not work.
Jessie increased the biplane's speed. It rushed past the trees, but wasn't fast enough to get far ahead of the Red Baron; that was when Jessie realized there was no way she could get far enough a head of him to pull the trick off off, unless she...Jessie suddenly jerked back on the throttle; this was so unexpected it caught the Red Baron off guard and he yanked back on his own throttle, slowing his plane. Then, before the Red Baron had time to react, Jessie rammed the throttle forward and sped off again.
Jessie clenched the pilot's stick, she was sure she was going to leave figure marks in it; she struggled to keep from trembling. The Red Baron was gaining on her once more; it was now or never. Yanking down and back on the stick, Jessie nearly yelled when the plane slowed down so fast it could have given her whiplash, but it worked. The biplane dropped, almost crashing into the trees as it fell and slowed speed.
The Red Baron, completely caught off guard, flew right over the biplane; then, before he had time to circle around, Jessie stepped on the throttle and pulled the stick back. The plane soared upward; it rushed on as though it intended to touch the sky. Jessie knew the Red Baron's plane could go higher then the biplane; the good thing was that he knew it too. She did not slow her speed as she mounted higher and higher; the Red Baron clung to her tail and continued his non-stop shooting. One bullet hit the biplane's wing, then another. They tore the canvas away from the wing and caused the biplane to rock wildly.
When Jessie knew she could go no higher she shoved the pilot’s stick forward; the plane began hurdling toward the ground. The Red Baron felt sure the bullets had done fatal damage to the wing, and that the biplane was now carrying Jessie to her death; he smiled in satisfaction.
However, Jessie wasn't through yet. Yanking back on the stick she just avoided hitting the trees; even so, as she passed inches over the trees the wings of the plane touched some of the tree tops. Jessie started wide eyed as the trees passed under the plane; that had been a little too close even for her! She knew she would have to be more careful; she hadn't done many stunts before, and one false move now could result with her planted in the ground.
Jessie quickly turned the plane and, before the Red Baron could recover from the shock of seeing her pull the plane out of downward spiral, she was behind him. Now it was his turn to try and shake her. Determined to get behind the biplane once more the Red Baron began to circle; Jessie did the same.
Around and around they went, the circle grew tighter, the planes came closer together. Bullets filled the air; the Red Baron could not aim in the tight the circle, but that did not stop some of the bullets from striking biplane. Slowly it began to loose power, and Jessie knew an engine had been hit. Black smoke filled the air, making it never to impossible to see. This did not stop the Red Baron from shooting. It was during the fry that Jessie was shot in the arm.
Fiery hot pain tore through her body, she tried to fight it off and kept a firm grip on the stick. However, it no longer mattered. The biplane was sputtering, the engine was cutting out, and now Jessie could see flames in the black smoke; the engine had caught fire. Before Jessie had time to think of what she should do, the biplane lost power and went hurtling toward the ground. This time Jessie knew she could not pull out of it; she was going to crash.
“Faither help me!” she prayed as she yanked back on the stick and slowed the plane. There was no way to avoid the crash, but at least she could try and make it less painful.
Jessie's arm hurt so bad she could not use it. Her vision was blurred and her head was spinning; she could barely think straight, let alone stop the plane, which had started spinning in its downward spiral. Jessie did her best to stop the spinning, always aware of the fact that the ground was coming closer with each passing moment.
It took all her strength, but Jessie finally steadied the plane and pulled out of the spin. Below her Jessie could now see a meadow; directed the plane toward it thinking that would be the safest place to crash land.
However, now that the plane was slowing down, the smoke drifted back into Jessie's face and clouded her vision; her eyes began to water and she blinked several times, trying to see. She had a feeling the Red Baron was still on her tail, she highly doubted he was going to let her land, unless he planned to finish her off on the ground.
She kept a sharp look out for the triplane, she even dared a glance over her shoulder, yet she did not see him. Did he think she was done for and so gave up? Had he returned to the village to finish what he had started? The engine belched more smoke just then and reminded Jessie of the problem at hand. She turned her attention back to the meadow, she had to land before the plane lost power all together and implanted her in the ground.
The plane entered the meadow hard and fast, the wheels touched the rocky ground and the plane bounced back up again. Jessie set her teeth and held on, through her mind flashed stories of planes crashing into balls of flames in which no one survived.
The plane was going to fast for Jessie to land it on the first pass over the meadow, it touched the ground two more times before Jessie had to pull up and turn before she crashed into the trees. The wheels touched down once more, then three more times. Jessie stepped on the brake as the trees rushed out to meet them, at that moment she knew there was no escaping the trees. Turning the plane, Jessie miscalculated, and one of the wings was caught in the tree line; the wing came off, and in doing so whipped the plane around, embedding its nose into the trees.
Jessie was thrown forward in her seat and momentarily stunned. Thick black smoke billowed around her, covering her with a snuffling blanket. Though breathing became difficult she could not move, her body throbbed with pain, and she seemed unable to think. Flames continued to lap at the engine, growing brighter with each passing moment.
It was at that moment that Jessie heard a noise that sent her heart to hammering. The silence of the meadow was suddenly broken by the sound of another plane landing, the Red Baron! Jessie scrambled out of the plane, the flames were now spreading and blocking her exit; she turned and climbed out of the other side. The moment her feet hit the ground her knees buckled and she was sent tumbling to the ground, she quickly picked herself up and turned to run into the woods. She was not fast enough.
A pair of powerful arms closed over her, holding her tightly. A hand, as hard as iron, closed over her wounded arm and sent pain ripping through her body. Jessie cried out in pain and fought back the growing blackness that was threatening to take her.
“At last!” the Red Baron turned her around and glared darkly out her. “I have you in my grasp!”
All of Jessie's pluck fled and she looked up at the man. She saw the bitterness in his eyes and knew she was done for, she may have survived the crash but she was not going to survive this man.
“You are a nuisance,” the Red Baron was saying as he hauled her back from the plane. “It is a wonder that man put up with you for so long.”
Jessie closed her eyes against the man and groaned, “He had little say in the matter.”
The Red Baron scowled and opened his mouth to saw something when the the flames found the gas tank. Eagerly they ate up the gas, and very soon the biplane was nothing more then a ball of flame, small explosions sounded from it.
The Red Baron hurried away from the ball of fire, pulling Jessie with him. It was only when he was a safe distance away that he stopped to look, and it was then that Jessie tried to make her escape.
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May. 26, 2009 - This is my entry :D
Jack Baillot's Ghost
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