The Cluttered Desk

Welcome to the Cluttered Desk!


Greetings to you all! We are five adventurers in the strange and challenging world of writing. We call ourselves Poverty's Penmen, and, as we've adopted each other, we are now of the clan Inkfire. I will introduce us in order of age.

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The old codger among us is Theynore (I do mean that nicely). He is originally from Prethamia, though he spent some time in Galicia. His mad pistol skills keep the villans at bay when they attack us. He catches spelling mistakes and his skilled begging helps us reach various deadlines.
Theynore's Desk Drawer

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The next oldest is Isilwen. She is recorder of Hemlock (though she writes other tales as well), and is the only one of us (so far) that is published. Her book "Trouble in the Tomb" came out in 2007. When the villans escape, she uses her overly-long sword to fight them, and her craziness keeps us all laughing.
Isilwen's Desk Drawer

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And then there's me. Yep, I'm the one writing this: the Sarconian Elf turned blog secratary. When the villans get out, I fight them with my invisible sword, and I may be the only authoress who has married a character. As an 'old married lady', I try to keep the others in line.
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After me comes my almost-twin, Kantare. He's a Trinitian Master from Trinity and had the idea for this blog. The villans have steered clear of him so far. He lives to the east, and we don't make c-box contact much (we're going to kidnap him), but he's added alot to our conversation and plots.
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The youngest (but not least) of us is Ninwaii (given that I have the ages right). She is also from the land of Trinity, and is actually the daughter of King Jorian. The villans have stayed away from her as well. Due to time-zone differences, we don't talk with her much (yet ANOTHER kidnapping), but she is deffinately a valuble cohert.

There are also many characters running about here, most usually, it seemes, Jordaan, Joshuel, Thoene, Striker and Callan. They are often joined by their coherts and have been known to be utterly crazy. Be wary, and don't let Thoene get near the tabasco sauce.

Jun. 1, 2009

The Newsboard

 

A note from the secretary to all my dear siblings - I seem to be the only one posting on here.  I would like to ask that you each log in once a week and post something pertaining to writing.  It doesn't necessarily have to be a book excerpt, a short story, or a poem.  You can rant about writer's block or how loverly a certain kind of pen is - just make sure that the post is authory.  If you can't do once a week, at least try twice a month.  

In the event that I do not see two posts from each sibling each month, I will bombard the clulprit(s) with PMs and/or emails.  If you are the culprit and wish to get out of being bombarded, I will accept five excuses:

 1. Limited internet access (you aren't around a compy)

2. Sickness 

3. Truely serious business that takes priority over posting here 

4. Killer writer's block (you can't write anything whatsoever) 

4. Being kidnapped by orcs (i.e. unexpected engagement elsewhere)

Helpful sayings :

 

Writing is like a path that takes you by the hand and runs with you. Beware, you could end up anywhere.

This wise saying was brought to you by Kantare Bandoine.

 

 

 Book/Novel Progress

Theynore

I am currently halfway through writing my novel Dark Prophet, and I have started numerous other projects, the more prominent of the novels Six Feet Under, currently standing at eighteen pages. I am also co-authoring a book which is called TRAPPED! which is at twenty-two pages long.

Isilwen

 
Word spreads quickly in HSB so I am certain some have already heard. I have given up on Hemlock, the writing of those books have been taken up by a dear friend of mine. Never fear though, I have not laid down my pen!
 Editing on Misadventure on the Mountain is going well, I am almost done rewriting it. I am on chapter 3 of my pirate book, chapter 3, or 4, on my mystery book, The Lord is my Shepherd. AND! I started a new series called Nightshade. It is my version of Hemlock, without the romance :D

Justyne

I have finished Sarco.  And now I've started Proeiden Tessares.  I've finished off chapter one and am started chapter two.  I'm cutting some stuff and changing a few scenes slightly, trying to stay away from the cliche.  We'll see how it all goes....

 

Kantare

I finished my second revision yesterday (Ap. 22, 2009), my sibligns!!!  Now I'm editing  it frantially, and then it's off to Random House by June 3rd!  Yay!  Pray for me, because I'm competing against adults who do nothing but sit at home and write.

 

*To the siblings - Please post any Newsboard information that you find and try to update your sections whenever you can.  This post will be moved back to the top once a week or so.

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May. 30, 2009

Escape from the Castle

She stood in the dusk, heedless of the wind that whipped her hair about her face, mindful only of the salty drops that slid down her face, clear as her name, Crystal.  The view spilled before her green eyes was beautiful, but she was beyond noticing it.  Her brother, seeing her trembling shoulders, came up behind her and gently laid a hand on them.  She flinched at his touch.
"Walker?"
"Yes, it's me.  Don't turn around.  It's hard enough without..." he trailed off.
She turned around anyway, looking up into her brother's face for the first time in her life.  His blue eyes, once green, had never had to angle downwards to look into her eyes, but Walker was a foot taller than he had been the day before, and he towered over his sister.
Walker felt the shiver that ran through her when she saw him and felt a stirring of anger and sadness; anger at the wicked enchantress who had altered his appearance for nothing more, it seemed, than her own amusement, and sadness that his sister should have fear in her eyes when she looked at him.  Crystal saw the pain in her brother's expression and understood it.  She, too, had had her appearance altered, though not the same extreme as Walker.  The enchantress, in testing a potion, had made Crystal beautiful, almost beyond compare.  Crystal hated it.  Ravishing females had far more to worry about than girls with average appearances. 
"Why?" she whispered, turning away from her brother and leaning on the railing of the small balcony on which she stood.
"I don't know," said Walker, coming to her side.
"How can life ever be the same again?" Crystal asked softly.
"It can't be," Walker replied blandly.

"Why is that so hard to accept?"

Walker shrugged.  "Maybe 'cause we like normality."

"I've got to keep holding on to the hope that maybe it'll all be normal again."

Walker turned away from her.  "It's a dead hope," he said, his voice holding a tinge of bitterness.

"Why?"

He spun back to her.  "Why do you think?!  That enchantress has altered my appearance, and you, my sister, didn't know me!  How could I possibly expect anyone else to?  I'm not Walker Firestone anymore.  I'm turning into a strange person that I don't even recognize!"

"No, Walker.  You're still the same, to me at least."

"I won't be if we stay here much longer," Walker muttered.

"Walker...."

"That's it!  We're escaping."

"What?  How?"

"I don't know.  But we can't stay here."

"Are you mad!?" Crystal cried.

"Much more of this confinement and I will be." 

 

Crystal slept restlessly that night.  Walker paced the room, sliding his hands over the green walls, peeking behind the blue curtains, moving the mismatched furniture around.  He muttered to himself constantly, playing out theoretical scenarios one after the other under his breath.  At last he leaned against the wall.  With a moan, he slid down it and dropped his face in his hands.  "No.  No.  No...." he whispered.

Crystal watched him, peering through the darkness, tears pooling in her eyes.  He hated to see her brother look so defeated.  He leaned his head back against the wall with a dull thud, staring bleakly out the window.

A hair-thin crack ran up the wall.  Suddenly, a piece of plaster  crashed to the floor.  Walker jumped up, starring at the wall.  Crystal jumped up from her couch and ran to his side.  There was a shudder, and a six foot square area of the wall opened.  Musty, stale air drifted towards them.  An icy breeze came from the black hole, tugging at their clothing.  Crystal shivered in her shift.  More plaster fell to the floor, covering it in white powder.

"Quickly, Crystal.  Get your things," said Walker.  "That plaster falling is certain to draw the enchantress."  He ran to their couches and grabbed the blankets.  Crystal pulled on her threadbare dress and picked up a battered comb; all that she had.  Walker put a blanket over her shoulders like a cloak, then flung another blanket around himself.  Grabbing her hand, he led her over to the passage.  After hesitating a moment, they entered it.  It turned immediately, and a few steps later, everything was pitch black.  Crystal shrieked and clung to her brother.  Slime dripped from the ceiling.  Moss and other fungi's that, somehow, needed no light, hung from the beams and traced across their faces and shoulders.

Walker put an arm around Crystal and pulled her forwards, groping in front of them with a hand.  Crystal screamed once more as her foot caught in something.  Walker pulled her free but slipped on the floor.  They fell, and only after much scrambling did they regain their feet.  In the slick passage, they stumbled many times.  The corridor twisted and turned, always leading steeply downwards.  At last, Walker and Crystal came to a steep flight of stairs.  They struggled down it, feeling blindly about them in the darkness.  Walker lost his footing.  Bending to save him, Crystal slipped and fell after him.  They tumbled down the stairwell and crashed into a wall.  Pulling themselves up by the wall, they groped forwards, searching for the next leg of the passage.  Then their feet touched nothing and they fell into inky blackness.  

A massive splash sounded as they reached the end of their fall.  They rose from the water, gasping.  Crystal screamed and went under, swallowing water.  Frantically, she clawed her way back to the surface.  A pale green light slowly illuminated their surroundings.  They were in a cave.  The walls were smooth.  Ten feet up, there was a balcony.  The enchantress stood on it; it was the end of her wand that created the green glow. 

"How do you like my arena?" she asked them.  "I made certain that all the passages in this castle led here.  You get a log and a sword.  The moat is that way.  If you can get out, you are free. If."  She laughed.  The deep pool of water in the cave was suddenly illuminated from the side under the water, turning the water to green glass.  Crystal screamed again as she looked downwards; the bottom of the lagoon was strewn with bones.  There was a splash as a log fell into the water, a sword embedded in it.  Walker and Crystal swam towards it and grabbed hold of it, panting and glad that they no longer had to tread water.  Walker pulled off his blanket cloak and laid it over the log, then kicked off his boots.  With a determined look, he seized the sword in one hand.  Kicking their feet, brother and sister began to head towards the moat.

The water near the entrance roiled.  A sea-serpent raced towards them, mouth open.  Walker stabbed at it.  It rolled away.  Taking a breath, Walker dove after it.  Crystal could see him, suspended in the clear water across from the serpent, his sword glittering in the eerie light.  He swiftly collided with the beast, and took hold of it, grasping at its scales.  The serpent thrashed, and the distorted shapes Crystal saw told her nothing.  Walker surfaced grabbing air, then dove into the troubled water again.  Looking up, Crystal could see the enchantress looking downwards at them, her dress the same green as the water and her skin a ghastly color because of the reflection.  Her black hair swirled about her as she laughed at the blood that came to the surface of the quieting water. 

Crystal's heart seemed to stop.  Then Walker surfaced, sucking in the air with huge gulps.  The serpent surfaced as well, but belly up, blood streaming from its mortal wound.  Crystal kicked the log over to Walker, and he threw an arm over it, still panting.  Crystal took the sword from his weakening hands and began to guide the log towards the moat again.  Another serpent came at them.  Crystal trembled with terror, knowing that Walker could not fight again yet.  

"Right behind the skull," Walker gasped to her. 

Crystal pushed away from the log and dove under the water.  The weight of her dress carried her downwards swiftly.  Her hair floated around her as she opened her eyes.  Kicking slightly, she was able to stop her descent.  The serpent came at her, roaring soundlessly.  Crystal thought of the tales of dragons that she had heard, for it was as if the beast was flying.  The shock waves of water buffeted her.  In the first collision with the beast, she failed to strike the vital place behind the skull.  The sea-snake hurtled past her to the bottom of the lagoon, where it began to turn around for another charge.  Crystal returned to the surface, pulled in a deep breath of hair and dove to meet it.  This time, she followed Walker's example and grabbed ahold of the snake.  It rolled wildly.  Drawing back the sword, she plunged it all the way through the serpent's neck.  It convulsed, then died.  The body began to drift towards the surface, and Crystal let it carry her.  Coming up, she breathed in the sweet air in great gulps.  Walker grabbed her wrist and pulled her arm over the log, supporting her.  Nothing else challenged them as the dark eyes of the enchantress watched them drift out into the moat.


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May. 30, 2009

Chapter Five...A matter of roast bird

 From my new book, I will lift my eyes to the Hills. That is all :D I can't stay and chat all day now can I? :D

The sun was ruthless, it was almost as if it found delight in beating down on them. Striker whipped the sweat off his forehead and looked at his companions; the only one who did not seem to be having trouble with the merciless heat was Ben-Argon. Striker shook his head, he was going to freeze in the mountains.

North west,” Callan was grumbling under his breath, “we'll never get back to the mountain at this rate! We are going to be drug all over this blasted desert!”

You want my help or not?” Trystan demanded.

Callan did not answer him but continued muttering under his breath. As the days wore on things went from bad to worse. When the party had left Kallum's home they had taken as much food and water as they could carry, but as the days passed and their supply dwindled, patience followed it. Soon their tempers were as hot as the sun over head.

Exactly who are we looking for, or are you just leading us on, hoping to find someone as we go,” Callan walked up beside Trystan and tried to draw him into a fight.

They are not the easiest people to find,” Trystan muttered.

Who are they?” Striker did not speak much, and each time he did his voice was cold and hard.

Trystan laid his hand on the hit of his long, thin sword. “They are the, the Scouts.”

Callan stopped dead in his tracks. “You never said anything about the Scouts!” he snapped, he grabbed Trystan's arm and spun him around.

Trystan shrugged his shoulders. “I promised you an army, what does it matter if they are nobleman's guards or Scouts?”

Are you as dumb as all that?” Callan demanded, “Scouts and Rangers do not fight together.”

Ben-Argon shifted his feet, he knew trouble was brewing.

It is time for a change,” Trystan said in a scornful tone in his voice. “Once they find out the Sea Raiders have invaded I am sure they will help...”

We don't need help from Scouts!” Callan growled, “I knew I should not have trusted you!”

Where else are you going to get help?” Trystan's eyes flashed, “the noblemen? Take it from someone who has lived in the desert; the noblemen care nothing but for themselves! You won't even be able to get farmers to help! They have their own troubles with harvest! If anyone helps you it will be the Scouts!”

And how exactly are they going to help me?” Callan snapped.

They will help take your head from your shoulders,” Striker grinned.

Callan turned on him. “Maybe they will do the same to you! That would be one consolation!”

There was a gleam in Striker's eyes, as if he agreed.

Ben-Argon stepped into the middle of it all. “I wouldn't be worrying about them yet,” he said, “seeing as we have to find them first.”

Easier said then done,” Striker muttered under his breath. They all turned and looked at him with surprise; he quickly shaded his eyes and studied the countryside.

What do you know about this?” Callan took a step closer to him.

Does it really matter what I know?” Striker demanded.

Trystan crossed his arms over his chest. “It might,” he said warily; he looked very closely at Striker. “Have you seen the Scouts before?”

Striker bit his bottom lips until he tasted blood; he had a sudden urge to yell and hit something. “It doesna matter,” he muttered, “now, are we going to stand here all day?”

Striker moved forward, walking quickly. The others hurried after him and let the subject drop for the time being. A few days later another spat started between them, this time it was started by Ben-Argon.

Oh! What I wouldn't give for a roasted fowl right now!” he said as he placed a hand over his growling stomach.

Callan, who had yet to get out of his foul mood, grumbled, “Now we shall have to put up with a whinny nobleman!”

Ben-Argon turned on him, hand on his dagger. “What?” he snapped.

Nothing,” Callan snapped back.

Ben-Argon ground his teeth. “That was nothing!”

Knock it off you two,” Striker muttered, “you are acting like children!”

Ben-Argon and Callan both turned on Striker. “Children!” they snapped.

Striker glared at them and Trystan rolled his eyes. “I am with Striker on this one,” he muttered.

Keep out of this!” Callan growled.

A fight nearly broke out at that moment, would have, had not a sudden shadow passed over them. All four of them looked up, they were very surprised to see a huge, black cloud drifting between them and the sun.

What is that?” Callan asked, he could hardly believe what he was seeing.

Rain cloud?” Ben-Argon asked, not being able to see it he could only guess. He felt sure it could not be a rain cloud as he could not smell rain in the air; and it was the wrong time of year.

It is too, dark,” Trystan rubbed his head uncertainly. “I haven't seen anything like it before Ben-Argon,” he added after a moment.

Striker studied the cloud, it was not moving, just hanging in the sky; and it was all alone, all around it the sky was blue. “How could it have just appeared like that?” he asked no one in particular.

Callan shook his head. “Well, it can't do us any harm since it is in the sky, we should keep walking.”

They followed this plan, but the cloud had sobered them a great deal. All that day they could think about nothing else but that huge black cloud, and as they walked it seemed to follow them. It might not have been too bad had it, in blocking out the sun, lessened the heat; but if anything it only made things worse. Now the air was heavy and it was hard to breath, stuffy.

We need to stop,” Trystan was the one who first said it. The others were more then ready to agree by then, and they sank down to the sand; without a word they all opened their water flasks and took drinks.

We have to get out from under that cloud,” Striker looked up at it again; it seemed to him as if it was lowering in the sky, he rubbed his eyes.

And how are we going to do that?” Ben-Argon asked, he fought back a yawn. It struck him how tried he was, he wondered what was causing it. “I think I could sleep for a whole week,” he said over a yawn.

Trystan stared at him. “Are you feeling well Ben-Argon?” he asked quickly.

Yes,” Ben-Argon nodded his head, annoyance in his voice, “you don't have to worry about me all the time, I am not fail just because I am blind!”

Callan leaped to his feet suddenly. “What is that?” he demanded, he stepped on something.

What?” Striker looked up at him.

Callan pulled his foot up and everyone but Ben-Argon looked down. Trystan's face went as white as a sheet and he leaped to his feet; Callan saw the look of horror on his face and jumped up as well. Striker took a step backwards and Ben-Argon stood as well, though he had no clue as to what was going on.

What is it?” he asked.

One of the Scorpions!” Trystan said in a tight voice.

Ben-Argon took a step backwards, his face went as white as Trystan's.

Striker knelt down by the dead bug while Trystan looked at the cloud again. “What is so bad about one scorpion?” he asked, he had heard about them of course, but this one was dead now; no harm there.

We have to get out of here,” Trystan suddenly said.

Striker looked up. “Why?” he asked, “what is going on here?”

Ben-Argon fixed his blind eyes on Striker. “Scorpions do not travel alone,” he said, “they travel in packs, and they fly. That is no cloud, it is a swarm of scorpions, very deadly scorpions!”

Striker looked at the cloud again, even as he looked he saw something black drop from it and fly at him; it dropped to the ground at his feet, and for the first time he got a good look at a desert scorpion. It was as black as night, except the tip of its stinger and its eyes which were blood red. The scorpion was not more then two inches long, its tale was the same length. Its wing were glossy black and folded at its side; it was truly hideous.

It fixed its red eyes on Striker as he stood staring at it, then it darted forward and extended its tale. Striker drew his sword and leaped out of the way; when the bug was within range he chopped it in half. He looked back up at the cloud.

Come on!” Trystan snapped, he pulled everyone out of their state of horror. Quickly they hurried after him.

Before leaving though, Striker looked back down at the scorpion and saw that its blood, which was like acid, was eating away at the sand. He ran after the others, suddenly feeling sick; fear was an unknown feeling to him. Even as he took off running he felt, rather then hurried, a buzzing in the air. Looking back he felt his stomach drop to his boots when he saw that the cloud was moving, coming right at them!

Run!” he yelled, though he knew the others did not need him telling them that. Trystan grabbed Ben-Argon's arm and they took off. They were able to run faster over the sand then Callan and Striker, but the other two had a good motive for keeping up.

As they ran, and the buzzing came closer, they knew there was no way they could out run them; when the first scorpion darted past them this was confirmed. Striker, who still had his sword in his hand, spun around and cut one in half as it flew through the air; it fell to the sand and started sizzling.

Trystan let go of Ben-Argon's arm and drew his own sword, Callan saw what they were doing and followed their example. With a sinking dread Ben-Argon did the same. They all stood, back to back in a tight circle as the scorpions descended on them, covering them in blackness.

Buzzing filled their ears as the scorpions flew around them, they could see nothing but the blood red; it was for this that they aimed. They knew they hit them when they heard a hissing, sizzling noise. The scorpions were so close together, however, that there was little risk of missing; even Ben-Argon stuck down many just by swinging his sword about.

They were doing rather well, until they noticed something, they were not cutting down as many. When they took a closer look horror filled them; the acid was eating away at their swords!

We have to get out of this!” Callan yelled at the same time Striker yelled out in pain.

I've been stung!” he cried.

Callan was still swinging his sword, but one managed to break past and sting him on the arm; instantly a fiery hot pain tore through his arm, then it went numb. His useless sword fell from his hand and dropped to the sand. The scorpions seemed to realize they had the upper hand and moved in; they began to sting the young men without mercy. They all dropped to the sand and tried to protect their heads with their hands.

As weariness washed over them all Ben-Argon heard something that broke through the constant buzzing; he listened and thought it sounded like the wings of a huge bird. Suddenly a shriek filled the air; they covered their ears, it almost felt as if it was going to burst their ear drums. The buzzing grew louder, it seemed to be lifting them and carrying them off, it was followed by another shriek, then silence; deadly silence.



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May. 24, 2009

Jasper's Conversion

As a matter of fact, the mission was unusual, for nothing happened.  Both mentor and student had expected to run into serious difficulties, considering the condition of the Scout they were replacing, but apparently he had cleaned out all the antagonists in the area when he was wounded.  Even the elements were oddly cooperative.  This gave Jasper more time to think and ask on-field questions than usual, and the conversation began turning to religion quite often.  Jasper had come a long way from that first conversation with Jack in the attic, but he still lived in terror of the gods, both those of the plains and the Lord.  This left him divided.  The gods required that he serve them, the Lord required that he serve Him and Him alone.  Jasper could not serve both, but neither could he choose one without invoking the wrath of the other.  It came down to deciding on which was real and which was the invention of man.  Neither existing was not an option for Jasper - he was convinced that there was some sort of deity.  If there wasn't, where had the world come from and why did things like snowflakes look like the work of a master craftsman?   Why were the stars scattered across the sky in patterns that looked like archers, dragons, or other recognizable shapes, and why did the tip of the Great Horn always point to the north? There were too many proofs for him to ignore.
The question burst out of him one night beside the campfire.  "What about the third condition?"
"What?"  The confused look on Jonathan's face made Jasper realize that he needed to explain what he had been thinking about before going further.  
"Ryan did a lesson one night about the three conditions.  But he...as he covered everything the Lord did, living a perfect life and then willingly giving it up - it only covered the first two!  So what about the third condition?"
"The guilty accepting the sacrifice of the innocent?"
"Yes.  How does one do that?"
"You have to die," said Jonathan, "and you have to be buried."
"As the Lord was?"
"Yes.  If we are united with Him in His death, we shall be united with Him in His resurrection."
"Did you die?" Jasper asked slowly, after mulling this over.
"Yes," said Jonathan.
"So...this must not be a...uh...death death."
"Physical death, you mean?"
"Yes," said Jasper.  "So how is it done?"
"Well, you die, meaning that you utterly forsake your former way of  life and commit yourself to living in a way that will please the Lord."
"And the burial?"
"That is done in water.  It symbolizes the grave."
"And resurrection?"
"That is when you come up out of the water."
"So what, in short, does the Lord want from me?"
Jonathan looked Jasper straight in the eye.  'Everything."
"Isn't that a little, well, drastic?  I mean...everything!  It's too much!"
"It's no more than He asked of Himself.  While He was here, He devoted himself to teaching and caring for people.  When He died, He gave His life for you so that the powers of evil would have no power over you.  He gave all He had to give and then some."
Jasper was shaking his head.  "Still..."
"Life is easier when you are in His hands, too.  I know, it looks rougher; you have to give up things that look good, but later, it pays off.  You live a life with fewer regrets, and the regrets you do have are from times when you strayed from His ways."
"Ryan once said that is was a terrible thing to fall into the hands of God," Jasper commented.
"God is perfect and just.  If all of us got our just deserts, we would die, for no one is perfect, and God cannot accept someone who is not perfect.  But what has been done in His sacrifice allows us to fall into the hands of God without the stains of our past life, and God is not only just, but loving and merciful."
"So, let's say I give God everything, what do I get?"
"You get the privilege to stand in the presence of God as his child, holy and loved beyond measure."  Jonathan watched Jasper's face for a moment, then said, "You take the first watch and think."  He rolled himself into a blanket.
Jasper sat and pondered.  Everything.  Everything.  He pulled up his knees and rested his chin on them.  When you give someone everything you have to give, you give them your very self.  He considered similar happenings back on the plains that he knew of; debtors who could not pay back the money that had been loaned to them and so had to give up everything of value that was their's - even themselves.  When you give someone yourself, you belong to them, and they can deal with you as they like; you have no rights.  But when you give God everything, he makes you his child...after he gave you the ability to even approach him to give him everything.
Now that I consider it, what do I have that I can truly call mine?  Myself, my life, and my family; Kaia and the Breakers.  But God created me and gave me life, so those are a gift from him.  And God granted that my sister would be born into my family, so she is a gift from him.  And then he granted me my second family after I lost my first, so they are a gift from him as well.  So in the end, God gives me everything I have and gets nothing back but a willing heart, and that only if I come to Him.  To me, it seems he asks so much, and yet, in truth, it's not hardly worth anything at all.  But somehow, it's enough.
Jasper had stopped wearing his talisman after he became a Scout Student, but he had never put it from his person.  It had ridden in a little  pocket for some time, now he drew it out.  'Everything' is still hard, but I'll start here.  He dropped the talisman into the fire.  Slowly, as the night went on and the wind moaned its lonely way through the pines, he began to give up the hatreds and grudges he had held within him.  A thing Ryan had said helped him in this.  "Hatred and grudges don't die in a day, and you won't ever be completely free of them in this life.  The important part is not so much getting to a place where you don't have those thoughts as it is getting to a place where you surrender those thoughts to God as soon as you have them.  Giving yourself to God is a starting point, not the finish line."
It was at that moment that Jasper realized that Jonathan had only been pretending to be asleep.  Jonathan now looked keenly at Jasper.  "There's a deep creek down thataway," he said, meaning that he was willing to immerse Jasper on the spot if Jasper wanted him to.
Jasper hesitated.  They were on a mission.   The Aranara could fall on them any minute that they were not on guard.  But then Jasper decided that the Lord was more important than the Aranara; if he got himself killed doing what the Lord had commanded, so be it.  "Let's go."
The water in the creek was ice cold and took Jasper's breath away as Jonathan lowered him under it.  When they came up out of the water, Jonathan left Jasper alone on the creek's bank, sensing his student's desire for solitude.
A shining light came from the trees, and Jasper turned.  The light was brighter than midday, and yet Jasper felt no need to shield his eyes.  He became aware of a presence, awesome and powerful.  Jasper trembled as the majestic figure emerged from the light, but he felt no terror.  Instead, he looked into the figure's deep, ageless eyes, his heart throbbing with alternate joy and fear.  The figure stepped forwards and laid his hands on Jasper's shoulders.  Jasper stood and shook, his blood flying through his veins many times faster than it should have.
"Be still," said the figure gently.  Jasper shivered once more in response to the figures deep, unearthly voice, then stood still.  "Tell me your heart," the Lord said, beginning to walk.
"I daresay You know it better than I myself, Lord," said Jasper, naturally falling into step beside Him.
The Lord smiled.  "I know everything, Jasper, but that does not mean that I do not enjoy it when My children talk to Me about what they think and feel."
Jasper's mind was blank for a time, but then a question he had wanted to ask for a long time came to him.  "Why did my parents die?  Why couldn't we have just  stayed the happy family that we were?"  Emotion poured into him at a rate he would not have thought possible, and tears started pouring down his cheeks like a spring thaw.  In front of anyone else, he would have been embaressed to be crying so hard, but here, it seemed natural to let emotions surface and play themselves out, since there was a tangible sense of not being able to hide them.
"I have a plan for you, Jasper, and it involves you being here, in the mountains.  If your parents had not died in the plague, you would have been brought here a different way; a way that would have been far more painful."
"What would have happened?"
The Lord reached up and wiped the tears from Jasper's face.  "It is not for you to know what would of happened, for that knowledge would only hurt you.  What did happen is far more important."
"Is that why I was adopted into the Johnson family and engaged," Jasper flinched at the memory, "to Misty?  So that I would run away?"
"One of the reasons, and the only reason you are to know for now."
"Why can't I know the other reasons?" Jasper burst out.
"Because they will be revealed in due time, and it is not a good idea to rush such things.  At this time, you are not yet ready to accept the other reasons."
They walked a little further, then sat down near a small cataract.  "Will I ever see my sister again?"  Jasper asked.
"You will."
"I was so angry, being separated from her like that.  I never thought of myself as an angry person, but I was angry.  Angry at the people who took my sister from me, angry at Misty for treating me like she did, angry at the Johnsons for pledging her to me with no regard to how I felt.    Did...did all of those things have a reason?"
"Nothing that happens happens for no reason.  The reason may be quite small, but there is still a reason."
The longer they spoke, the more words poured out of Jasper.  It was as if his heart had become a book that lay open on the rocks for them to read.  He did not know how long they stayed there; time seemed not to exist when the Lord was present.  At last, the Lord rose to leave.
"Will I see you again?" asked Jasper wistfully, looking up at him and feeling like a time of joy and healing was drawing to a close.
The Lord looked at him gently and placed His hands on his shoulders.  "Yes, you will.  But, until then, always remember:  No matter where you are, I can always hear and see you.  Read the Words that I left with you, talk to Me, and I shall be with you, always, even at the very ends of the world."  Turning, He melted away into the trees.
Jasper returned softly to camp.  Jonathan lay on his back, breathing quietly.  Jasper lay down on the other side of the fire, curled into his cloak and a wool blanket, and fell asleep.
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May. 21, 2009

A Note from the Author... but which one? >:-D

Ah, I couldn't keep you guessing THAT long. It's Theynore here, with some (albiet forced) updates on my progress. I will admit, though, it is exciting; I am co-authoring a new book with another author here on HSB (names and the name of the book or any information will not be disclosed soon) and it's going well. I am picking up the pen again now that I have FINALLY finished my Junior year. As always, life hit me full force and pretty much butchered my school so even though I passed *cross your fingers, my last class is still in the balance* it was not up to my standards, and I was appalled at the turnout. I will be putting out much more work now and should have no problems finishing work, editing mine and the works of others and dabbling with new ideas. The latest was an idea I got today when I was at Borders (a bookstoor in town) for a series of books called The Island Chronicles. The basic details is that it is set in the realm I created *the one with Jordään in it* around the time of 1860. This series is a side adventure with some characters not in the original Chronicles that I wanted to dabble with. The Bohemians have claimed that some of the islands to the South-West of them were old territories owned by Greater Bohemia in the first Century, and demand their return from the Kotoan Government immediately. Of course the staunch old-style government refuses and war breaks out. The Bohemian Army Generals believe that the fight will be small and that Koto is so behind the times that all the force they will bring to bear will be sticks and swords. Little do they realize that the Kotoan Army is a battle-hardened foe, just waiting behind thick jungle defenses and mountain strongholds to destroy their enemy. The bitter truth of the matter is realized during the first minutes of the landing near Ichoro-Sobo, the little island village bearing the brunt of the first wave, where the 1/7 King's Own Cavaliers (1 represents what number unit they are, 7 represents out of how many, in this case the first battalion of seven) are struck down under intense cannon and rifle fire from the entrenched garrison. Even though they eventually captured the beach and gained three kilo-meters of territory before the day was done, they had lost their commanding officer, Lt. Col. Saanders *he was killed just on the outskirts of Ichoro-Sobo* and nearly sixty-nine percent casualties to the enemy. Book 2, Iron Mountain, continues the struggle for Ichoro-Sobo *this was not only the name for the village, but the Island it was built on* Mount Kurisancho is critical to the campaign for both sides because it has a commanding view over the other two islands. Another reason is because Koto has placed heavy artillery *3 inch naval guns* on top of the mountain in fortified positions and is reeking havoc upon Bohemian troops, especially those attempting an assault upon Fort Ichoro-Sobo *on the most northern island in the three island group* Casualties mount as both sides grapple for the mountain hold. Five days of bitter fighting conclude in a draw, yet it is a marginal victory for the Kotoans. The final book in the series is Red Bay, also, this is the final battle for Ichoro-Sobo, Mount Kurisancho, and all three Islands. During the lull, the Kotoans re-enforced their garrison with 12 fresh Battalions straight from Kagoshima; but the Bohemians have done this same thing, bringing a full division to bear upon the Kotoans. The naval guns have not been taken out and this leaves them full reign to take out any approaching ships in sight. The generals of Bohemia decide to make a determined assault on the beaches below Mount Kurisancho, with devastating losses on both sides. By the end of the day the fresh division has become so bloodied and battered that it can no longer be considered a fighting force, and is withdrawn to the northern end of the island to await re-inforcements. I look forward to all of my projects with enthusiasm and hope to hear comments and questions from all of you soon. Arivaderchi!

~Theynore

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May. 20, 2009

Random stuff from an author's head

This is a random scene from a book that may or may not ever be written.  Neither the plot nor the characters are fully hashed out yet.

Jason banged his head methodically against the wall as the pouring rain drizzled off the eves.   This was idiodic.  Through the thud of his head on the wood, he heard a step and looked up.  She was watching him.  Oh no.

"Are you okay?" she asked, coming towards him worriedly.

"Um...yeah," he sputtered.  I was just...banging my head against the wall."

"And you're okay?"

He nodded emphatically.

"Really, Jason."  She stepped closer and touched his arm

Jason jumped backwards and tripped on his own feet, tumbling to the floor like an oversized spider.

"Jason," she said, "You are not okay."  Her voice was placid, matter-of-fact.

Jason scrambled to his feet.  "I'm fine.  I just...bang my head against the wall every now and again...uh...to make sure that, um, my skull isn't hollow or something....like...that......"  He waved his hand vaguely.  That sounded rediculous.

She smiled.  "Sure you do.  Really, I can tell when people don't feel okay.  Can you tell me what the matter is?"  She approached to conversation distance again.

Jason backed frantically away, ending up in a corner.  Must. Become. Part. Of. Wall.

She came within a few feet of him.  "Well?"

"You make me act weird!" he burst out, frustrated with her and himself.

"I'm sorry," she said honestly.  "I don't mean to."

"No...I mean, yes.  I mean...uh....I'm sure you do...don't."  He winced.

Silence prevailed.

"Nice day, isn't it," Jason said, trying at some rare conversation.  Making small talk with people was not something he ever did.

Lightning charred the middle of the street, and the building shook in the answering crash.  The rain came down harder and a leak opened between them.

"It's stormy outside," she said.

"Um, I know.  I, uh, find the thunder quite.....invigourating.  Very loud and....smashy...ish."  He flicked his eyes nervously about the room, glad that no one was watching this.

"Yes," she said politely.  Then her eyes grew more serious.  "Jason, I lied.  I'm sorry.  You were in my dream, just not the last one, the one that brought me here.  Until that last time, you always ran above me in the castle.  Knowing you were there made me feel protected."

Jason dropped to one knee and tightened his boot straps to hide his rapidly paleing features.  She couldn't be the girl he'd dreamed of, running below him, toward whom he felt such a strong protective instinct that he would have dug the heart of whoever dared to harm her out of their chest with a spoon.  "I must go."

"Why?" she asked.  "You barely got here, and it's raining."

"Orcs," he replied.  The words came so fast that they tripped over each other.  "They're a dreadful nusince, and that's putting it lightly."  He stood up.

"But they haven't been out of the Hole for years!!"

"And I must make sure it stays that way."  He jumped out the window and bolted, leaping onto his horse and riding away on the wings of the wind.

Jason Coralvin, for the first time in his life, ran from something not dangerous to his well-being.

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May. 4, 2009

As the wind howls past my door....

It's happened.  Yes, three years of work; done.  Finished.  Utterly completed.  'From A Forgotten City,' called 'Sarco' in conversation for short, has been written.  

I'm having after-novel blues.

This means that I'll have to say goodbye to every character that I've written for this novel, with the exception of Tarian.  My Jaybirds (Jasper, Jack, Jonathan & Joshuel), Kaia, Misty, Melissa, Lar...I shall never write them again.  Even Chase, whom I bonded with a little at the end of the novel, will not enter into my next book.  It's depressing.

Joshuel:  Stop cutting the onions!!  They're *sniffle* making my eyes water!!

Jonathan:  *sings 'I Will Always Love You' to Justyne and makes her cry*

Jasper: *dusts himself off*  It was time for that novel to be finished anyway.  Still... *agrees with Joshuel about the onions*

Jack: You said it.

Melissa: *sighs*

Misty: What??  It's over??? WHY?

Kaia: But.......I wanted more paragraph time!

Tarian:  You're certain you can't get Lar into the next book??

Lar: *wears a cloak with a deep hood and looks mysterious, as always*

Chase:  I never find out what happens to me?!!  NOT FAIR!

Characters from the next book:  *hope that Justyne doesn't take three years with their book*

So, yes, it's over.  My characters will never leave me alone, but still.......*hugs all her characters*

May your pen be swift, and may you never have after-novel blues this bad.

Justyne

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