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Dec. 25, 2007 - Lesson 3/4 of Suzy's Writing Workshop

Well, here goes!

Meet my main character!

Name: Lydia Mason

Age: 13

Where she lives: on a ranch in Glen Rose, Texas.

Time period: 1869

Hair (color and style): sandy colored. Usually streaming out from under her cowgirl hat.

Eyes (color): bright, snappy green

Build: medium height, apx 5', strong and able bodied.

Clothing: checked gingham shirt with chaps and spurs. A cowgirl hat and bandanna tops it off.

Setting: On a ranch

Traits: she has a habit of wanting to be able to do things herself. She is often found saying things like: 'I can do it....but thanks anyway.' or 'I think I can manage.'
She also has a hard time being looked down upon by other girls who have the required, 'social graces' of her day in age.

Plot:

Lydia's mother died when she was a baby.
Her father is a trail boss, working on a ranch in TX. He had turned her into a tomboyish cowgirl. She could rope and ride and do most everything a cowboy could do.

Her biggest dream is to go on the roundup this summer with her father. Mr. Mason says that she can......IF she can prove herself to the ranch owner, Mr. Matthew Cubbins.

With the help of a few cowboy friends she does this and is off to face the wild, lonesome prarie.

Well......that is what I have so far.....Comments please!

 Me

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Dec. 25, 2007 - Whoopee!
Posted by skmarlow
Say, I love your character, Lydia. She sounds just like MY character, Andi. And wouldn't it be fun if they met someday? LOL
You did a nice job with her physical description and with her big "likes" (as in, she'd like to go on the cattle drive). How about writing a bit about her personality too? I know she's a tomboy, but is she...cheerful most of the time? Determined? Insecure (I doubt it!)? Does she have any "negative" traits she needs to work on? My character has a hard time with self-control. She acts and speaks before she thinks.
I'm so excited to read more about Lydia and her adventures. Your story already has a "problem" and a "plot" (see lesson 1), two of the important elements in a story. I'm also excited for you to join the class. Did you know that I"ll be mailing out certificates to any student who completes the entire course? :-)
And if you PM your address, I'd love to send you a postcard and/or bookmarks of my books. :-)
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Dec. 25, 2007 - Untitled Comment
Posted by Brenna13
Thanks Suzy!!!!
I will add her 'traits' now!!!
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Dec. 26, 2007 - Uh....
Posted by skmarlow
It doesn't usually work so well to leave a comment to a comment on YOUR post. You need to click back to the WW to leave me a comment or PM me. I happened to be making sure my links were working (I replaced your Brenna to Brenna13 on my WW students' list to make it easier to go to your page to read your stories) and I saw your comment to my comment. LOL
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Dec. 26, 2007 - traits...
Posted by skmarlow
I just read your additional info on Lydia and I like it! It really helps round her out. Indeed, my "Andi" and your "Lydia" are so much alike! You can read the first chapters of my books about Andi and the Old West here:

http://www.susankmarlow.com/Books1.htm

Just copy that code into your URL address at the top and then click on the cover of the book whose first chapter you'd like to read. :-)
Let me know if Lydia is anything like Andi. LOL
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Jan. 4, 2008 - Untitled Comment
Posted by mystoryblog
That sounds like an intersting story!

(this is booklover's story blog.)
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