I am going to pretend that I am a gold nugget durring the gold rush....A big hand has just reached down and picked me from the stream.
I was busy admiring my reflection on a shining, smooth stone when a shadow was cast over me.
I thought many things at once of which I was not afraid, such as, fish, bird or duck, or perhaps a fisherman.
But, alas! None of my assumptions were correct! A large, rough, bear-like hand was enclosing me in a tight and suffocating grasp.
After a moment of swirling around for what seemed like ages there was a loud shout of sheer joy,
'Matthew, Jonas! We is gonna be rich! This here stream is teaming with gold as well as trout!'
I was held up for all to see. I felt quite exposed in the bright sunlight and wished to be buried in the wet, muddy sand at the bottom of the stream.
But, I should have wished no such thing for in a moment, I was shut up in a cloth bag with no room about me. And so I am decidedly against whatever it is that caused me to leave my lovely, shimmering home.
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Nice word choices. I like it!!!
I also like how you included dialogue here. It kept me gripped.
Short, beginning, middle and (sort of) ending. You left me on a cliff-hanger! What happens to you (gold nugget) now? LOl