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A Writers Thoughts
Feb. 1, 2008 - FINISHED!

Whew! i am sorry that it has taken SO long but here is the LAST lesson in the Writers Workshop!

I decided to make my OWN ending......(is that ok Suzy?)

The whole thing was over. Memories of the week came floating through Hannah's head. Almost drownding in the storm, her brother turning up missing, Cow (the cat) had nearly been killed.

She heaved a long sigh as she curled her fingers around her arms, shaking at the rememberance.

   "From now on," she told herself, "I will never wish to be an only child. I will be greatful for what I have and for what God gives me. what do you think Cow?" she asked picking up her pet.

   'I agree!' the cat purred.

OK! comments please!

A memory of the plot or problem
2) The character's feelings
3) A decision the character may have made as a result of his adventure
4) A hope for the future

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Feb. 1, 2008 - Lesson 16
Posted by skmarlow
Wow, Brenna, this is a fantastic ending! This was exactly what you were supposed to do. Nicely done. I can feel Hannah's regret and resolve to change. All of that in just a few short paragraphs. The cat purring is the perfect "last line."

Now...go and write that story about Lydia! LOL

Oh, I'm glad the lessons worked for you the way you wanted them to. Again, you can do them any way you like. I assume you're not going for the certificate, right? If you ever change you mind and want to earn the certificate, you need to go back and do the lessons you skipped:
1,2, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 15.

Does that look right to you? I couldn't find lessons for those, but if you've done them please set me straight by sending a link. Otherwise, thank you for being part of the writing workshop, and if you ever want to share parts of your Lydia story, just leave me a comment on the WW blog or on my new Andi blog: www.homeschoolblogger.com/CircleCRanch/

-s-

Edited by skmarlow on Feb. 1, 2008 at 6:23 PM
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Feb. 2, 2008 - Dude.
Posted by forestcrazy
That was really good Brenna! I wish you would put something in the story contest for my blog! I haven't gotten any entries in a while...actually, right now, I have got two. :) Announcing the winner in a few days, I suppose...

Great work.

..svenja
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Feb. 2, 2008 - Hey!
Posted by Brenna
contests? i never could find them! send me the link please!
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