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Nov. 13, 2007

Creative Writing lesson for today

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The  Treasure

One day a little boy was playing with his kite.His dad came to him and told him to go get a barrel of water for him while he was working.When he picked up the barrel he saw a big chest like thing . He went and hid the chest . He opened the chest and saw some gold . Later that day a pirate and his mship and took the boy and his treasure to a island . When he got there the pirates told the boy to give the treasure to them . He said only if you get a little bit of it but the rest to pore people . They said okay . They took him home and buried there treasure and gave the other to poor people. They all lived happily ever after.

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Nov. 13, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by southmsmomof4
Great story Yak. I enjoyed reading it and always like a happy ending. ;-)
Mom
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Nov. 20, 2007 - Loved your story...

Posted by proverbsmomof3
I love how you creatively used the words for this assignment and stepped out of the traditional 'pirate' story. Great Job.
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Dec. 2, 2007 - hey

Posted by animalfriend98
hey yakastan,



how r u feeling hope that your monkey doesn't die .
this is from that funny movie u won't be so happy when your people get mad and hang u by your thumbs.
bye
Animalfriend98

Edited by animalfriend98 on Dec. 2, 2007 at 9:34 PM
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Dec. 18, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by southmsmomof4
I don't see todays assignment on here.....what happened???? Love ya,
mom
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Jun. 3, 2008 - HEY YAKASTAN

Posted by kaybug1997
Hey just wanted to say hi. I will see you at church and at school in july. My cousin's fiancae is having a baby girl on wednesday the 4 of june write me back later
YOUR FRIEND
KAYBUG1997
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