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Feb. 27, 2007

My Haiku Contest Entry

Mom assigned me a poem to write called a Haiku.
We are entering it into 4EverHisChild's Haiku contest.

Mom helped me yesterday in the van by teaching me what syllables are.
We counted the syllables in my name and other words.
We talked about poems and rhyming.

A Haiku is a Japanese Poem.  Haiku's do not have to rhyme.  They have 3 lines. The lines have 5 syllables, 7 syllables and 5 syllables.
I made a list of words about the snow, our goat kids and our new horses.
Mom helped me think of how to organize them into my Haiku.


Here is my Haiku:

Out in the Cold
Cold, icy, hard snow,
Goat kids jumping up and down,
Tall horses running.



You can enter the Contest, too.
There are 3 age categories and 3 different prizes.

Sincerely, Eric

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Feb. 28, 2007 - all are very good

Posted by Grandpa
I've read all of your poems .. they are very good.
Love you,
Grandpa
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Feb. 28, 2007 - Goats...

Posted by 4evrHischild
We had a chance to get some baby goats last summer and we didn't because we didn't have a place to keep them. Now that I've been reading your haiku and your sisters haiku, I wish we had made a place for them so we could see them jumping up and down in the snow.
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Feb. 28, 2007 - Haiku

Posted by Grandpa
I know I posted a coment earlier ...... I have gone back and reread each of the poems.
Very Good .... continue doing the right things RIGHT
Love,
Grandpa
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Mar. 5, 2007 - Cool Poem

Posted by bugboy
I think I would like to enter the contest. You have a cool Haiku Poem.
bfn,
Bugboy
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