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Dateline: Jan. 22, 2008
lesson four.

Lesson four, "Character sketch"

 

Daniel is 14 and has short black hair and brown eyes. He likes looking after the animals on there farm and walking and playing in the woods  with his two dogs. He also enjoys fishing in a nearby creek. He likes doing adventurous things but sometimes dos not think about the consequence's before doing things.

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Dateline: Jan. 11, 2008
Writing lesson three.

 

Lesson three.

                     

Character: Charlie Woodrow, age 14

Physical characteristics: blue eyes, short brown hair , brown eyes and some freckles. Athletic and tall for his age.

Personality: Friendly, lively and adventurous though stubborn some- times, does not think before doing things.

Likes/dislikes: likes animals, his two dogs and the other animals on the farm, camping and adventures. dislikes chores.

second character

Character: Daniel Woodrow, "Danny" (Charlies twin brother) age 14.

Physical  characteristics:  black short curly hair with slight tanned face, brown eyes, not as tall as his twin brother.

Personality:  cheerful and determined but quick-tempered.

Likes/dislikes: likes camping, riding horses, fishing and advetures.

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Dateline: Jan. 5, 2008
writing lesson two.

Characters

"Warm up box"

Write the name of a character you really liked: The Sioux Indian, (Little House on the Prairie)

Write a character you didn't like:Sir Guy of Gisbourne,            (Robin hood)

The reason I like the Indian is because he is friendly to the Ingalls family and brings them food when they are lost in a blizzard. He also saves Charle's life when he is hunting. He is also very brave.

The reason I dislike Sir Guy of Gisbourne is because he is cruel, he hate's Robin hood and wants to capture him and his men and is greedy and trys to get more money by putting extra taxs on the poor. He trys to capture Robin by tricking him.

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Dateline: Jan. 4, 2008
Hi everyone, writing lesson one.

Hello and welcome to my second blog, in this blog I am going to put my writing lessons from Suzy's Scribbles and things I write like book reports and stories. Here is my first lesson that I did on Wednesday. I've started writing lessons with Suzyscribbles.  To take part go to her blog. In the first lesson you have too plan a appealing character, a interesting setting, an intriguing problem, exiting events (the plot) and a satisfying solution

The book I've chosen is Old Yeller

Characters are: Travis and Old Yeller

Setting is: log cabin in the prairie in the middle of Texas

Problem: Travis's dad has to go on a long cattle drive that takes about a year and Travis has to look after the farm.                                                                                                                                       

Plot: When Travis and old Yeller are working on the farm, a grizzy bear cut wanders into the farm and Travis's little brother tries to catch the cub.  Then the mother bear comes running out of the woods that are behind their cabin towards Travis's little brother.

Solution: Old Yeller distracts the bear while Travis gets his gun and shoots the bear and Travis's little brother keeps the cub as a pet.

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