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Dateline: Jan. 11, 2008
Writing lesson three.

 

Lesson three.

                     

Character: Charlie Woodrow, age 14

Physical characteristics: blue eyes, short brown hair , brown eyes and some freckles. Athletic and tall for his age.

Personality: Friendly, lively and adventurous though stubborn some- times, does not think before doing things.

Likes/dislikes: likes animals, his two dogs and the other animals on the farm, camping and adventures. dislikes chores.

second character

Character: Daniel Woodrow, "Danny" (Charlies twin brother) age 14.

Physical  characteristics:  black short curly hair with slight tanned face, brown eyes, not as tall as his twin brother.

Personality:  cheerful and determined but quick-tempered.

Likes/dislikes: likes camping, riding horses, fishing and advetures.

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Jan. 14, 2008 - Lesson 3

Posted by SuzyScribbles

Great job on creating these twins. Obviously they are not identical twins--in looks or in personality. I can just "see" them! What a pair! Are you going to write a story about them? I think a "twin" story would be full of fun.
Keep up the good work, AJ!

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Jan. 14, 2008 - Lesson 3, p.s.

Posted by SuzyScribbles

You did Lesson 3 just right, AJ. Exactly right!
What you're seeing in others' lessons is that some of the kids combined Lessons 3 and 4. In Lesson 4 you will take your notes from lesson 3 and write out a character sketch of your characters in paragraph form. That's probably what you're seeing on the other kids' blogs. :-)

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