Monday, December 25, 2006
Story -- The Birthday Surprise - Part One
Posted in Short Stories
This story has been moved to my story blog, The Story Zone. To read this story, please click here.
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Monday, December 25, 2006 - Untitled Comment
Posted by Anonymous
Sounds good, looking forward to next week
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Tuesday, December 26, 2006 - Untitled Comment
Posted by Anonymous
Cool! Looking forward to next week as well.
ttfn,
Jill(Morgangirl003)
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Thursday, December 28, 2006 - A comment :)
Posted by Anonymous
You said that you like comments so I thought that I might give you one.
You might want to edit a little on that last piece that you wrote...
Why is she always disobeying Mom? she though to herself. I’m not half as bad as she is.
Change "though" to "thought" ;)
-The Mysterious Commenter, oh yes I am a very real person. :)
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