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Nov. 4, 2005 - Teh Poem

Ok, so in English the other day, we had to write a poem using three of these words : red bicycle, chicken noodle soup, umbrella, elephant, key, shadow.

 

It took me, like, the whole period, but I finally finished it! YAY!

 

 

 

The key in shadow gives way,

To something exotic, I daresay,

Finding the key will take you some time,

But I will explain it all in this rhyme.

 

First you must travel the paths all alone,

To a place shadows roam;

Where elves make their home.

 

You must search for the key,

You must find a bright place,

In this dark, dismal land,

Where the moon comes through lace.

In this lachrymose vale,

You must argue your case.

 

I'm sure you will search under oak, under maple,

Until you discover that it's really quite simple.

Just reach out in front, and unlock the lock,

Then you'll come on a land

Where umbrellas dance and elephants mock.

 

By indulging yourself,

You will soon realize,

That the key is not really and truly a key,

It's something more;

With no cost, but quite free.

 

For the key is imagination, you see.....

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Nov. 4, 2005 - Awesome poem

Wow, I can't believe you wrote that in one class period. You are amazing girl! When are you gonna come over and hang out with us??? I miss you and your mama!
Love you - Julie XO

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Nov. 4, 2005 - Untitled Comment

That is incredible! It takes me DAYS just to write a simple poem or some lyrics or anything like that.

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Nov. 5, 2005 - thats a....

really really REALLY good poem

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Nov. 7, 2005 - HI!!

Thanks! I was pretty much just writing what I was feeling...
so how are you? How's School? tell Taylor and (Brinnna?) I said
'You smell like feesh and hi :)'
lol...
so anyways luvya girl
~*Kaitlyn*~

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Nov. 8, 2005 - WOW!!!

Wow...oh my gosh...even if you weren't one of my best friends, I would have loved that poem! It's so dramatic, and like...cute! It's almost romantic...I just love it! Really really really awesome, Brenna!

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Nov. 14, 2005 - Brenna-

You must search for the key,

You must find a bright place,

In this dark, dismal land,

Where the moon comes through lace.

In this lachrymose vale,

You must argue your case.



I AM SOOOOOOOOO NOT GETTING OVER THAT LINE!!! That is awesome Brenna...awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, AWESOME!!! It is hereby dedicated to me...

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Nov. 17, 2005 - Hey Brenna!

Hey Brenna! I just saw that you logged in...how are you?

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Nov. 22, 2005 - Untitled Comment

Happy Thanksgiving !
~Candace

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