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• Jun. 29, 2007 - "Watered down" Classics

Posted in Books & Stories

One of our local supermarkets sells classic novels at a very cheap price. I'd bought "Heidi" by Johanna Spyri to read aloud to my 8yo daughter, but when I got it home and opened it, I was in for a shock disappointment. The story turns out to have been "adapted" for modern readers. In my opinion, this means that it's been slashed, shortened and stripped of its character. I went to our local library where I know they have the original "Heidi" and borrowed that one instead. Since then, I've been reading the 1880 version to Emma and glancing through the modern retelling to compare the differences between the two.

 

To start with, many of the wonderful descriptive passages of the Swiss Alps have been taken out. I wonder how Johanna Spyri would feel if she knew what'd been done. She had lots of very lovely parts of the story which dealt with Heidi being taught about God and His love for her and the way in which prayers are answered. For example, in Chapter 11, her friend Clara's grandmother explains, "If we go on praying earnestly and and never run away or lose faith, our prayers will be answered. You see Heidi, what you asked for was not good for you just at this moment. God has certainly heard you. He can hear everyone at the same time because He is God and not a human being like you or me.... You see, when someone behaves like you so that God never hears his voice among those who pray, He lets him go his own way. And when he gets into trouble and then complains, "There is no one to help me!" God says, "Why did you run away from me? I cannot help you when you run away!" And all of this totally complements the plot of the story. I love reading stories like this to the kids, which reinforce God's love and care for them, but do you think the modern adaptation of "Heidi" has left any of this in the story? I think you've guessed it. Not one bit. Every mention of God has been deleted, leaving a "Don't worry, everything'll be OK," sort of wishy-washy theme.

 

I'm beginning to understand why we, as homeschooling families, need to turn to the Internet to order to search for the good and excellent books of our childhood. Bookstores no longer stock most of them. I'm going to order the "real" edition of "Heidi" along with its sequels, online. Emma has proven that she enjoys the original version and didn't need to have it watered-down like that at all. Her friend was over to play yesterday, and I heard Emma mention the story. They were both having a glass of milk, and Emma told Hannah, "You ought to see the gross thing they used to do in the book we're reading! The grandfather squeezes milk straight from the goats into a cup for the little girl to drink from!" And Hannah groans, "Ough, YUCK!"  I sit there smiling to myself. Nothing will ever convince me that the good old books, untouched by 21st century hands, are not superior.   

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• Jun. 30, 2007 - What a fantastic point

Posted by ComfyDenim
What a great comparison. I'll have to keep my eye out on these things now. Thank you!!

I wish I could have been a fly on the wall to hear the girls talk about the goat's milk. That's funny.

I love your thoughts on this! Thank you for sharing!!
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• Jun. 30, 2007 - <i>Untitled Comment</i>

Posted by jugglingpaynes
You bring up a valid point about so-called junior classics. It's very hard to find versions that don't water down or completely miss the meaning of the original text. But I will qualify that. I've read some books that are very good updated interpretations of classics. They are just hard to find.
You would probably enjoy the Whole Story series. They present unabridged books in a children's DK style (with added information in the sidebar to enrich the reading experience.) They are keepers if you can get them. They even have Heidi. Here's a link. (If it doesn't work I can e-mail it to you.
http://www.amazon.com/Heidi-Whole-Story-Johanna-Spyri/dp/0670869872/ref=sr_1_5/104-9964330-9724712?ie=UTF8&s=books&qid=1183174839&sr=8-5
Peace and Laughter,
Cristina
P.S. Feel free to delete this message when you're done with it. I noticed it messed up your margins. Sorry! :os

Edited by jugglingpaynes on Jun. 29, 2007 at 10:40 PM
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• Jun. 30, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by callmekate
This is so strange - for the last 2 weeks, I have been talking about getting the book, "Heidi", to read to my kids! No kidding! We bought it today at the home school curriculum show that we go to every year in Portland, OR. We bought it at a booth that sells used books and it's old, so I hope it's the original - I didn't think to inspect it (Todd is the one who found it). I have seen "adapted" books and we avoid them for the same reasons you mentioned. I read the other day that they are no longer printing the Little House books (Laura Ingalls) that are illustrated by Garth Williams. They are updating the covers to reflect more of an "adventure" story. What a shame! I hope they don't mess with Laura's words - they'd better not! New isn't always better, as we homeschoolers know. Thanks for this post - we must be vigilant! And I'm looking forward to reading "Heidi!"

Oh, yes, we got Logan's package! Yum!! Chad really enjoyed opening the box. He tried a Freddo first. He even let his siblings share one of the treats and when Alec ate his, he said, "It tastes like Australia!" We marvelled at the Vegemite - it's definitely different than anything we've ever seen. We love the stamps, too! Thank you so much! He's started thinking of his response. This is so fun. Every time we see or hear something about your country, we think of you guys. Take care and thanks for sharing a tasty sample of your part of the world!

Kate
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• Jun. 30, 2007 - Untitled Comment

Posted by callmekate
It's me, again. Thanks for your comments on my last post. You've given me something to consider. I would love for my daughter to remember that I didn't complain. Maybe it's not too late. I'm not quite as gloomy about Todd's working nights as I was so hopefully her overall memory will be a positive one. When I put her to bed, we always pray for Daddy, that's one thing I think she'll remember. I'm so thankful for my friends on this blog site! God bless!

Kate
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• Jul. 2, 2007 - Hi Paula,

Posted by jugglingpaynes
I have a Rockin' Girl Blogger award for you. Pick it up (copy the image) at my blog and pass it to 5 more women whose blogs you enjoy.
Speaking of passing, check my other blog for some neat juggling footage. I haven't had time to dual post it. Especially since I need my husband for that.
http://jugglingpaynes.blogspot.com/2007/06/juggling-at-d-and-ks.html

Peace and Laughter,
Cristina
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• Jul. 5, 2007 - abridged books

Posted by Jimmie
I totally agree with you. The original is almost always best. Of course, there are adapted books that are good -- Edith Nesbit's Shakespeare and I'm listening to a Librivox recording of the Illiad for Children by Church. Those are quality, just a simpler retelling of complex stories for younger listeners/readers.
Regarding Heidi, it was a SL title and it was not the original. I was disappointed. I would have rather read the real one even though the pictures in the DK version were nice.
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